Poem -
Me And You
Wondering if we fell in love
me and you
would we make it could we see it through
Oh how I often wonder about
me and you.
Both of us have been hurt before
neither one of us is really sure
would love last could it endure
Oh how I often wonder about
me and you.
We've both have seen loves wrongs
together we may see loves right
Too lost stars feeling so alone
finding each other in the night
Oh how I often wonder about
me and you.
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Comments
Awaited you for so long
Why now wandering about
the love? Love is immortal
dauntless plunge in without
worrying about morrow, as
life is full of surprises..
lol I love to have lyrical conversation..its so fun...David and I enjoy reading and replying in verses..We in poetry.com...do this frequently...excellent write David..
THANK YOU PIUSHA FOR LIKING. ME AND YOU
IT WAS A SIMPLE LITTLE PIECE THAT I ENJOYED WRITING.
SOMETIMES THE DEPTH OF SIMPLICITY RUNS DEEP.
THANKS AGAIN. MAY ALL YOUR WISHES BE GRANTED.
Heyy David..Its soo touching..I loved the way you wrote it..!!
Nice Rythym and a great flow..:)
Love
Surabhi
Thank you Surabhi- I really didn't expect to get any feedback on that piece it's an older unfinished piece I completed and then brought it here so thank you very much you're always so kind Durango.
LOVE
DAVE. :-)
disregard Durango that's a typo on voice text. Lololo