Hey David!!......... cool poetry, well conceived and delivered..........I like the way the way the closing line tied everything together......... and although Cherie makes an interesting point......... it could also be interpreted as a sniper trolling for victims.......... just a thought!!............ compelling write........... Love and Rockets!!........T xo
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Hey David!!......... cool poetry, well conceived and delivered..........I like the way the way the closing line tied everything together......... and although Cherie makes an interesting point......... it could also be interpreted as a sniper trolling for victims.......... just a thought!!............ compelling write........... Love and Rockets!!........T xo
Hello David...
Special friends first...
Anticipation?
LOL!
Thank you for sharing...
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