Midnight Mare
Wild as the northern lights
Color collides and ignites
Free as a black mareβll roam
A prairie landscape called home
Dark as pitch with flashing eyes
A cowhandβs valued prize
But alas you canβt harness wind
Magic thrives under the skin
Racing to catch a rising star
To that sunset horizon afar
Moreβs the pity for the fool
Taming her against the rule
For her fury knows no bounds
No mercy shown with hoof pounds
Passion the nature of the beast
A burning desire to be unleashed
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dedicated to Lady Cherie!
Was definitely a good read, and haha nice coincidence of similar theme! Had to give 5* :)
loved it, another great write, somebody throw some water on this woman, this girls on fireΒ
cheers jeff
This beautiful Sweet Poetess and the pix too...you a talent indeed...
Lots of love...Rose
That was so beautiful, i love horses so much <3
Hey DARKLY!!....I can see why so many writers jumped on this to share their thoughts...... there's a circulatory system running throughout this piece...... not easily recognizable.... but when you look closely (perhaps ~feel closely)... you're met face to face with a powerful idea..... there isΒ no harnessing the power of the spirit of a thing.... so long as that thing is aware of its undeniable sense and Creator driven connection to the "ALL"..... that thing that goes far beyond the idea of dying for one's own personal beliefs...... but the reciprocal power that comes from faith in something greater than one's own self.... no matter color..... sense of being human or animal.... just a carnal sense of being alive....... animal, planet, or star..... the essence is the same.......a connection to that which atheists term unfathomable...... and the religious call God....... what physicists refer to as ever-evolving energy........ you've touched upon something that philosophers have been trying to put into words for longer than language existed...... it's 'a VERY loving write in its essence.....I, for one, would give it 2 stars in the grand scheme of things ...LΕL.......it's off the charts in its intent...... and beautifully delivered girlfriend....... high fives.......smokin' grooves' sister.......smokin' ass grooves my friend........ smiles...... hope I didn't go too far overboard!!....... peace.......T xo
why only 2 stars tony??
Hey LISA (Darkly)......2 stars in that Grand scheme of things....... suggests that your poem would receive over 10 regular stars here....... it was meant to be sarcastic ....that's why I pinned this write..... because I think it's a great write......I was comparing your poem to the idea of universal knowledge.......I guess I just took the long way around in saying ~ 10 Stars PINNED...... yay!!....... Loved it Darkly......I was in a very philosophical mood last night (smiles).....T xo
Beautiful Poem! Thanks for sharing......love reading your work.Β Β Β Β Β Paula