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Mirage of Beauty

Mirage of Beauty

There is something about your face that stays strongly on my mind.
Embedded in my brain like a program designed to fall in love on replay.
Causing me to daze wild eye throughout the day.
It's incredible where the mind can take you.
One moment  I was holding you tightly in my arms.
Only to be awakened by my alarm, Holding my pillow like a foolish fellow
I can't shake this feeling, my emotions are too revealing.
locked away from your presence, Feels like a thousand Days 
And then suddenly when I least expect it 
you released my chains and now this mirage of beauty is finally before my eyes

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lodigiana

Hi Dwight, what a beautiful  piece!! so expressive and emotional and also very romantic!  Nice job! welcome to Cosmofunnel and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Lodigiana x

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Dwight Thomas

Thank you, Lodigiana 
I appreciate that I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm glad to be here  

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WormTendon

I found this really interesting.  I may be alone on this viewpoint but it seems to me that the choice of "mirage of beauty" leaves the reader in a state of intrigue in which the overall emotion could change quite a bit depending where an individual takes it.  Great job.

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Dwight Thomas

Thank You, Worm Tendon, for noticing that, I appreciate that

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Bryan Delorme

It's a beautiful illusion that is more real than this reality... There is someone fit for everyone... Haha at least I hope so... Maybe there is plenty. I tried plenty of fish... More like plenty of gold diggers lol
 

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