Mirror Girl
Today I met a girl
With a worn and ragged face
But something in her eyes
I saw a small trace
Of somebody I used to know
Her half hearted smile
Just a small and feeble grin
Disturbed me deep inside
And stirred up something deep within
I knew this girl
There was something there
In those azure blue eyes
Something so familiar
Yet so terrifyingly distant, I began to cry
This girl was driving me crazy
She smiled at my tears
And laughed at my dismay
I could feel her in my head
I opened my mouth, but there was nothing to say
This girl was wicked
The torment continued
Then finally I could take no more
I drew my fist back
And sent her to the floor
I winced as she shattered with the glass
Her eyes in my sockets
Her blood in my veins
I bet she gets the same feeling
I get when it rains
This girl is me
This shattered mirror gleams
Reflecting the moonlight
Amplifying the feeling
Of raw and bitter fright
I'm scared of my image in the glass
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Comments
Very intense poem, maybe once you make friends with this girl, you will bring about the best in her, and your mirror will smile back at you as you both merge into one gorgeous face.
Kind regards,
Shirley
Thank you, quite a lovely comment I was not expecting. I appreciate you kindness.
I agree with Shirley- very intense. Is it true? I don't want to say too much- so as not to undermine whatever emotion forced you to write this. A long time ago, I almost committed suicide- and I probably would've succeeded if I hadn't met someone at that moment who wanted to join me. Whatever the case- it's a brilliant poem. Bravo!
James Whaley
I was not close to suicide my dear friend, but I was in a very very dark place, I had stopped talking to people and eating. Thankfully I am better now, I really do appreciate all of your concerns and such.
Hey Summer,
Perhaps You've missed a dark experience under Your belt, so I guess You toke the best of it and wrote a poem, people comment on, poem gets nominated ; )
There might be some real money from misery after all.. just don't make a habit of it..lol
Stay in light,
Sirius
why thank you you for the lovely comment and p.s I love harry potter and sirius is my favorite
Hi Summer, hope things are going well for you, we all do have those dark corners and sometimes it gets hard to see them if don't turn on the light, but as soon as we do the darkness will no longer be. Anyhow i love your writings, and look forward to more of your posts.
Best
Shirley
why thank you you for the lovely comment and p.s I love harry potter and sirius is my favorite
thank you for checking in on me, and thank you, I had hoped someone would enjoy my writings :) thank you so mcuh for your support