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Miss Rude Girl

Miss Rude Girl

She's waiting for you just behind that door she's on her knees, crossed feet, straight posture but her heads down she's naked looking at the floor. 
Her hair is so perfectly tied plaited and her arms are already in place. Her hands are cupped together waiting for your chains.
your watching her, admiring her in silence she's a goddess at your feet. 
you wrap your fist around her hair and push her face into the sheets. 
Shes listening now 'girl get on your knees, palms down arse up' she without hesitation responds to your demands, 'good girl' you say 'feel the poison from my hands' 
one hand caresses her, possesses her takes her breath away. The other hand squeezes, teases and pleases her.
her body is insane!
her hips are dancing to your god dam tune and the climax is building up FUCK!!! 
Shes out of this world she's a diamond girl you can read her body like a book.
Shes the devil in your eyes as you part her trembling just licked thighs her pussys dripping wet.
'Please' she moans 'Ha' you grown 'I haven't started yet' She's seduced by the kiss on her collar bone, you gently grind you teeth across her slender hips. she lets out the most harmonious satisfied sounds when she feels the sting of your favourite bad ass whip. 
She begs for it!
You like to glide it down her spine and watch her arch her back. She has no idea how sexy she looks arms locked high in your shackles just like that. 
She smells so good you just need to taste, you write your name with your tongue on her clit. Her body shudders, she tastes Devine you feel the need to remind her 
She is it!
You release her chains and her hands get brave she thinks she's allowed to touch. You pin her down give her a frown as she continues to bite and thrust. 
'You know exactly what your doing to me' you say 'your fucking sexy miss' 
You demand her lift your hips to my lips drown my fucking face' 
Rude girl slipped a finger in. Shes fucking herself Dirty girl, she's climaxing she's grinding all over the place. 
Stop!
Your hands locked around her wrists devouring all of the juices from her succulent lips. I won't stop until you beg me to. 
Cover her mouth so you can hear her soul scream, scream for more. Don't scream my name filthy girl scream yours. She's not your fantasy she's your addiction, something out of pulp fiction.
Shes despicable, she's delicious Dam she's your miss! 

 

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Sarah-lou

feed back most welcome I'd love to know what you clever talented people think of my first ever attempt at an erotic poem. 

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Lost

If it is a first attempt...well bloody hell. 

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Sarah-lou

Lost ? thank you! Very much so yes it is. obviously it's not to everyone's taste but as a first try I'm very happy with this write, I do appreciate your feed back.  

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Lost

For a first try it is brillaint. You can only get better. The erotica quotient is very real and off the charts. 

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Sarah-lou

Brilliant! ? High praise indeed awesome! Thanks Lost. I'm quite sure it will not be the first and last I'm a new member to the group and I'm blown away with the sheer talent. What an incredible platform for writers to write and interact. 

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T Starbuck

I think this is really excellent....eroticism and hints of SM, hard to do with panache...this has it...cheers.
T

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Sarah-lou

Bad rhymes and incantations thank you for commenting your thoughts on this rude one, noted it's one many skip by SM seems to gets people's knickers in a twist, unless you the one twisting them of course. Hahaha 

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Sarah-lou

Bad rhymes and incantations thank you for commenting your thoughts on this rude one, noted it's one many skip by SM seems to gets people's knickers in a twist, unless you the one twisting them of course. Hahaha 

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Sarah-lou

Bad rhymes and incantations thank you for commenting your thoughts on this rude one, noted it's one many skip by SM seems to gets people's knickers in a twist, unless you the one twisting them of course. Hahaha 

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Sarah-lou

Bad rhymes and incantations thank you for commenting your thoughts on this rude one, noted it's one many skip by SM seems to gets people's knickers in a twist, unless you the one twisting them of course. Hahaha 

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