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MISS UNDERSTOOD

MISS UNDERSTOOD

Call it paranoia...
But I read between the lines
Not sure if you believe
I wouldn't notice hidden rhymes.
I think you have me all wrong
As your words have struck a chord
Your acknowledgment...encouragement
Placed me here on this scoreboard
So I'l be blunt...I guess I'm hurt
and so misunderstood...
Girl...It was your words that
reached a place no others could!
Call me cheesy...
Maybe misinterpret all of this
But above all I just wish
To PROpoSE my gratitude
Dear Miss!

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BLOSSOM

Carey, I have a feeling there is a subliminal message amongst that poem lol, they don't call me Mystic Meg for nothing you know ha ha!! Sounds like you're feeling a little misread and whoever or whatever that maybe about, there is no better way than getting your message across and exercising those demons in the form of a poem.  Thought the end was clever too lol!!  It only seems fair Carey that if you want to make a point it should get thrown out there and be swiped with that big yellow line lol, wouldn't want you feeling Misunderstood hun:)

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Carey Milton

Hehe hiya hun.:)
I am smiling ear to ear for your feedback on this.. (as you would already know hehe)
Glad it reached you in the only way a misunderstood gal could express. x
 

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Jayson Smith

my favorite lines--"

So I'l be blunt...I guess I'm hurt
and so misunderstood...
Girl...It was your words that
reached a place no others could!

Great meaning within your rhyme..

Very Nice!

Jayson (+)

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Carey Milton

Merrill..Your comment has hit the nail on the head!  I wrote this with so much emotion that I almost burst!!!

For you to be able to see this in a perspective that is unbiased makes me feel proud.:)
I wasn't sure If I was going to be able to convey what I wanted to say without totally combusting..lol

Thanks for your invaluable validation x

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