Poem -
Momma's Eyes
Time wanes in mommaβs eyes
Ticking closer toΒ a demise
Callow memories in a heart
Weathered lips gild impart
Offered haven in a storm
Devotion cast gently warm
Rustic gears, wisps to remember
Borne once upon a September
Creaking bones weary chime
Dinning clock winkles in time
Moments phase, 'tilΒ final hour
PendulumsΒ of graveside flower
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Comments
Just awesome!Β Your picture choice and word usage blow me away every time.
thank you Simon. I just finished it and am already not happy with the wording lol
I never am either lol.Β Ignore it because were always our own worst critique!Β Trust me its fantastic.
Excellent! It summons the thought of mortality and its enigmatic, yet inevitable demise. Well executed.
Ahh! Whence we all shuttle of this mortal coil.
great words as always poetess darkly.
Thank you kindlyΒ
so charming.
thank you kindly
Impressed,......again!
Q:)
thank you Q, I appreciate you stopping by to gift a bit 'o love
Wow!! As alwaysπ
thank you kindly SD