Poem - 20 December 2013, 16:31 Monster Jai Masters Danger is here In the form of a monster Burning with anger Psychotic rage He seeketh me Chases me down With his unresolved life In his hands And I crumble Under his violence Dead and down Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 800 Rating: Total votes: 0 Tags: Abandoned Abuse Cold Danger Poetry Genre: Drama 4 comments
Tina Moore20 December 2013, 17:02 something i can relate to ,only 5 of them monsters . good write jai tina x Reply
Jai Masters20 December 2013, 18:51 Jai is in the jungle with the monsters biting my legs, hundreds surrounding Jai lucky you have only 5, come save Jai i am being eaten by monsters Tina, merry monster Christmas Luv Jai :) Reply
Stephen Weyant20 December 2013, 20:27 jai I love this! you describe monsters, not an inner demon per say, but the hateful, resentful, envious, slanderous, deceitful, evil characters of others?!?! love a piece I can chew on! thanks again Reply
Jai Masters20 December 2013, 20:59 chewing is good, spitting it out too :) love your remarks Stephen, thank you Jai :) Reply
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something i can relate to ,only 5 of them monsters . good write jai tina x
Jai is in the jungle with the monsters
biting my legs, hundreds surrounding Jai
lucky you have only 5, come save Jai
i am being eaten by monsters Tina,
merry monster Christmas
Luv Jai :)
jai
I love this!
you describe monsters, not an inner demon per say, but the hateful, resentful, envious, slanderous, deceitful, evil characters of others?!?!
love a piece I can chew on!
thanks again
chewing is good,
spitting it out too :)
love your remarks Stephen, thank you
Jai :)