Poem -
Mosaic of dots
Co wrote by Sarfraz Ahmed & Pratibha Savani / Artwork by our friend Preeti Mistry
Dots on endless circles
Vibrant colours
Imprinted upon the surface
Like a patchwork quilt
And mesmerised by its grace and power
Intertwining
And winding like a trapeze artist
In precise mid flow
And spiralling out of control
Dots on endless circles
Vibrant colours
Are a constant reminder
Of my artistic nature
Like those on a dance floor
Oozing generous colour
In a mosaic of flawless dots
A masterpiece jewelled to perfection
A little creation of imagination
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Comments
This reminded me of a dream I recently had of a conduit opening up above me! cool pic and poem!...........Jim
Thanks so much! A beautiful heartfelt poem x
Lol thank you Jim and for the reading. Px
Our Australian Indigenous artists are all about the dots. Dreamtime/The Dreaming is often tied to the stars in the desert night sky, I think that may be why (how) it started.
Thanks so much! Pratibha and myself wrote this poem. It was a pleasure writing this. Inspired by a wonderful illustration. Thanks so much for the feedback. Sarfraz
Ooohh interesting....I've not looked into the history of Mandela's. But my friend Preeti has been enjoying this style and she set a challenge to wrote a poem with her artwork. So that's what we did!! The dots are mesmerising thats for sure! Thanks for your lovely comment Al!! Px
Wow! A great poem Pratibha that pulls a reader in and be captivated.
As does your incredible hypnotic pic and it's good to see that you share all with others Sarfraz Ahmed and Preetri Mistry.
Thanks for sharing and all the best to all.
Hi Shaun. Thank you for the lovely comments. My friend Preeti is into Mandela's and she even got this canvas into our local gallery few years ago! Set by Preeti the challenge was to write a poem with this artwork!! Px
Pratibha it was the least I could do, I gotta go but will tomorrow catch up and read your latest and earlier poems too.
Take care and thanks again.
😁 ok cool. Its bed time soon anyway!!
Really good and interesting.
Love, Terry.
xoxo
Thank you Terry 😁
Thank you Hj for reading this one too and the like!! Most appreciative. Px
Your words do this amazing picture fine justice. Well done the pair of you x
Thank you Tina. We had fun co writing. I started it off, sarf added then I edited it. Sarf had some good line which I developed. I dont think.i would have thought of the trapeze artist one for example!! Px
Just thought I'd take some time to look back on your previous work. I found this one. What a beautiful and captivating read, I especially liked how you intertwined the lines to create a deep and fluid feeling. Like sowing a dress. Really enjoyed this one
Hey Max. How are you?! Thank you for reading this co write and the lovely comments and fab pin! I'm so glad u enjoyed it. It's been quite fun to do collaborations! U must try. Px
XD, I am well P, busy but as always. A pleasure to read, I enjoy come back and comment on some of my favourite poets in my own time. Perhaps another collab is in order, the last time I did one was with Jim back at Xmas!! Hope you are well also, your friend Max~
I actually recall you did a collab!! Wow. It's fun. I do the same read catch up on my fav poets too, including you! I havent had much time lately to be online with family commitments. But I will catch up on some when i do. So nice to see you visit my posts. Have a fab day xxx