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Mother and Son

Mother and Son

Mother

Used to be

So cool

And easy

But lately

She has become

Resentful

and angry

Her son,

On the other hand

Has always

Lacked patience

And sensitivity

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Christopher Correia

Lol, it is true what you say sis.  but this one is about me dear old mum, the poor lady only ever had one child and she is unlucky enough to have an insensitive twisted fellow like me, however and perhaps recognition can lead to reconstruction....thanks again for comment; I timed myself on this one, and it took one minute and thirty nine seconds to write, as every poem should lol...

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Brenda Keough

awesome poem depicting a relationship between mother and son....beautiful inspiring words....thank you for sharing...

Thank you as well for your thoughtful review....I greatly appreciate all that anyone gains from the wisdom God shares with me.....

Hugs

Have a great life journey! 

Keep smiling :)

Brenda...aka Giggles the Poet

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Christopher Correia

Thank you Brenda,  I felt compelled to write something for me dear, sweet mum, and shazam!  there it is, she is a rather wonderful lady so it didn't take much effort to write this, so glad you liked....have a great life journey as well, cheers

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Tony Taylor

Hey C!!.........I feel like I've missed a lot of your most recent writes.........and I am happy caught this one........there is something about this write that hurt my heart..........perhaps because of my feelings about my own mother..........but like you said.........it poured out of you..........I can SO relate...........thanx for sharing this brother!!.............love and rockets!!...............T xo

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Christopher Correia

T, how are you?  Lol, something tells me that you and I have a lot in  common; maybe too much, nah you know I'm kidding, but these 'secret cloning experiments' conducted in the sixties; makes me wonder sometimes ;D ....my mother and I have a complex relationship, and I go for days without speaking to her and vice versa, but I love her dearly, it's getting easier for me to share around here, and I'm not sure if I'm completely comfortable with that yet, but I'm getting better....hugz...stay good, hope we talk soon 

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Christopher Correia

Cheers, Eddie and thanks for saying that bro.  very encouraging man, this one came very fast, I just wanted to send send out a greeting to me mum, and didn't want to think to much about it; we have a fragile relationship to be honest, appreciate the words pal, I've not eaten all day; trying to shed a few, I'm hungry as hell and almost out of Heineken, need to fry some eggs or something... cheers

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Christopher Correia

Hey Eddie, I tried that brother and will continue, I felt growth and muscle mass....lol I will keep the Cimmerian warrior image as motivation and grunt as much as I can, Viking style, and I think I know just the place that I can get away with that; down here in me dungeon, Led Zeppelin or Carlos Santana FULL BLAST, with 4 ice cold Caribs close by.... cheers pall and thanks eh.  

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