Poem -
Mountain
Clear water springs
Flowing streams into valleys
Treacherous at times
Air weak, breathing deep
Heaven filled with hard rain
Softening outer layers
Mud pushing down,Β
Burying lost days.
Memories of centuries past
Forrest's grow, harbouring life
Nature's protectress
Sees life, sees death
So fragile is the surface path
Caverns shield darkest labyrinthΒ
Echos rumbleΒ
As she calls
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Comments
Lovely poem, Lorna. I enjoyed reading it x
Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed this one :) x
Delightful and likewise very much enjoyed .. Neville x
Thanks Neville, I appreciate your words
hope you are wellΒ
:)
love it Lorna!..............................................................................................Jim
Thanks Jim, glad.you like it
LornaΒ x
Reading this made me ponder ...as i always do...what secrets and ancient history lie beneath our feet...lovely write Lorna x
Thank you Marion,
glad you enjoyed this one
Lorna x
Wow a fab word for trees as protectress.
And a wonderful poem, love your word choice. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you so much, I'll be over shortly to check yours out
I appreciate your kind wordsΒ
Lorna :)Β
total pin-worthy refrain
Thanks Lisa, glad you liked this one xxx
Another fine piece throughly enjoyed it.
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this oneΒ
:) lornaΒ