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MR PERFECTION PERSONIFIED

MR PERFECTION PERSONIFIED

He was perfection personified, with a lean muscled physique
drop dead gorgeous green eyes, raven black hair so smooth and sleek

Standing six foot four he towered over me, me being only Five foot two
he reminded me of stallion standing proud and strong, i wipe my brow phew!

Oh yes he really took my breath away, in more ways than one
from his head to his toes he was delicious, and oh my! his firm pert bum

Me being me i needed to know the man his personality, for me beauty is only skin deep
there is no point in getting to know him if hes not nice, only sorrows I`d reap

So i approached him nervously, as he stood waiting to be served at the bar
i sidled up beside him as it was busy that night, in my local The morning star

He said" please go before me" and made space beside him so i could get a drink 
i thought great he`s a gentleman but what shall i say to him now i just could`nt think

so the old cliche came out and i said do you come here often
he smiled and said no, i noticed his eyes crinkle at the sides and soften

we stood there together chatting  for an hour just everyday chit chat
i thought i had died and gone to heaven, until in walked Matt

Id like you to meet my partner Matt my stallion said i saw love in his eyes
dear me what was i to do now, i did`nt want to show my surprise

They looked so in love so happy you could see that by a mile
so i decided to come clean tell them my thoughts they began to smile

Then we three started laughing and me fancying him was all taken in great jest
but i did`nt let on to Mr perfection personified, 
how much id have liked, to be cuddled up to his chest :-)

 

 Note  A very similar thing as this happened to me when i was young and naive (smiles)

 

 

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Tony Taylor

Great storytelling here DEBS!!...... the pic had me expecting something completely different....... the mark of a great writer........ I'm still laughing!!...... you my friend ......are SO MUCH FUN!!......I loved this!!.......and then the fact that the three of you stayed and laughed about it was seriously cool icing!!.......ALL STARS.....PINNED.....too much fun........LOVE and ROCKETS !!.......T xo.  ?

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Tony I wanted to write a funny write i`m glad 
it made you laugh. Yes i did stay  there with them most of 
the night and we had a good old laugh about it 
Thank you for your comments and glad you liked it 
love n hugs Debs  xo

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Rose Sho

Hey Debs....Aww!....I thought you just met this Mr. Gorgeous....I was expecting a "happily ever after" tale.....nevertheless you've never dissapointed me with your write.....enjoyed it a lot.....love the description of the guy....I have a perfect image in my head

Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Rose   Aww sorry to spoil it for you but 
glad you enjoyed after.  I don`t do funny writes that 
often but have been in that kind of mood today :-)
Lots of love Debs 
 

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Rose Sho

Lol....you didn't really spoil it Deds as it was a "Happily ever after" though in a different kind of way....as  you all had a good laugh and you made us laugh by sharing it..I'm glad you got the mood for the funny write....it was an interesting one

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J A Overton

aww this was well written and thought out, liked the twist at the end lol 

cheers jeff

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Deborah Evans

Hi Jeff Thanks for your comments, glad you liked this one 
Nice to write a fun write now and then 
Best wishes Debs 

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RRG (Rebecca)

This is delightful Deb. :) Did you three become friends? Hugs and Blessings, Rebecca

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Rebecca Thanks for your comments Glad you liked it 
No i don`t see them, but have never forgotten that night lol 
Hugs Debs 

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