MR PERFECTION PERSONIFIED

He was perfection personified, with a lean muscled physique
drop dead gorgeous green eyes, raven black hair so smooth and sleek
Standing six foot four he towered over me, me being only Five foot two
he reminded me of stallion standing proud and strong, i wipe my brow phew!
Oh yes he really took my breath away, in more ways than one
from his head to his toes he was delicious, and oh my! his firm pert bum
Me being me i needed to know the man his personality, for me beauty is only skin deep
there is no point in getting to know him if hes not nice, only sorrows I`d reap
So i approached him nervously, as he stood waiting to be served at the bar
i sidled up beside him as it was busy that night, in my local The morning star
He said" please go before me" and made space beside him so i could get a drink
i thought great he`s a gentleman but what shall i say to him now i just could`nt think
so the old cliche came out and i said do you come here often
he smiled and said no, i noticed his eyes crinkle at the sides and soften
we stood there together chatting for an hour just everyday chit chat
i thought i had died and gone to heaven, until in walked Matt
Id like you to meet my partner Matt my stallion said i saw love in his eyes
dear me what was i to do now, i did`nt want to show my surprise
They looked so in love so happy you could see that by a mile
so i decided to come clean tell them my thoughts they began to smile
Then we three started laughing and me fancying him was all taken in great jest
but i did`nt let on to Mr perfection personified,
how much id have liked, to be cuddled up to his chest :-)
Note A very similar thing as this happened to me when i was young and naive (smiles)
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Great storytelling here DEBS!!...... the pic had me expecting something completely different....... the mark of a great writer........ I'm still laughing!!...... you my friend ......are SO MUCH FUN!!......I loved this!!.......and then the fact that the three of you stayed and laughed about it was seriously cool icing!!.......ALL STARS.....PINNED.....too much fun........LOVE and ROCKETS !!.......T xo. ?
Hi Tony I wanted to write a funny write i`m glad
it made you laugh. Yes i did stay there with them most of
the night and we had a good old laugh about it
Thank you for your comments and glad you liked it
love n hugs Debs xo
Hey Debs....Aww!....I thought you just met this Mr. Gorgeous....I was expecting a "happily ever after" tale.....nevertheless you've never dissapointed me with your write.....enjoyed it a lot.....love the description of the guy....I have a perfect image in my head
Lots of love
Hi Rose Aww sorry to spoil it for you but
glad you enjoyed after. I don`t do funny writes that
often but have been in that kind of mood today :-)
Lots of love Debs
Lol....you didn't really spoil it Deds as it was a "Happily ever after" though in a different kind of way....as you all had a good laugh and you made us laugh by sharing it..I'm glad you got the mood for the funny write....it was an interesting one
aww this was well written and thought out, liked the twist at the end lol
cheers jeff
Hi Jeff Thanks for your comments, glad you liked this one
Nice to write a fun write now and then
Best wishes Debs
This is delightful Deb. :) Did you three become friends? Hugs and Blessings, Rebecca
Hi Rebecca Thanks for your comments Glad you liked it
No i don`t see them, but have never forgotten that night lol
Hugs Debs