Poem -
My Existence
The hurt
The depression
The oppression
The comeprehension trying to understand.
The moment realizing theres no understanding , The moment your trying to comprehend your existence.
& while the days, Weeks go on your wondering what you have to offer, Realizing it's absolutely Nothing.
i'm Nothing
i am Nothing
& Still trying to remain positive but realizing optimism never worked for a soul like mine & all thats remaining is the hurt, Depression, & Oppression.
So when does a soul like mine get elevated & when does a soul like mine find her inner Peace, Because shes falling into her own abyss that she'll soon drown in.
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Really meaningful words, Ann. You definitely have a lot of skill tucked away :)
Really ? Thankyou so much i was hesitant to go threw with it but I decided not to let fear get in the way . i really appreciate the compliment it means so much to me .
Glad you went ahead and wrote it, some of the greatest minds in history thought that they couldn't do it, but once they went ahead with it, there was no stopping them. There is potential in everyone, but it only becomes a reality once you go with it. Keep writing ;)
Thank you again much appreciated ?
You're welcome :)
I love this. Keep writing.
its just that I keep thinking that your missing something. Im just not sure what it is yet
Well im open to ideas im trying to be the best i can be . I haven't wrote in awhile so i'ma bit rusty lol but i felt so much sadness & anger built up i had to let it out some way . . But thankyou hun?