Poem -
My Final Poem
I've tried to fight the pain inside
but nothing seemed to work
So today will be my final day
the end to all this hurt
I can't escape this misery
or hide the way I feel
So Death is all that's left for me
the only thing that's real
Is there anyone who hears my cries
or are they silent shouts
Does anybody see my pain
or know what its about
Will Death relieve this tortured soul
and set my spirit free
Or would I be a shadow of
the man I use to be
There's no more time to truly tell
since nothing seemed to work
So today will be my final day
the end to all this hurt
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Comments
there's always tomorrow keep writing keep going forward keep trying press on
God put each individual here for a specific reason Linda
never give up i used to live in the deep dark whole of depression but i climbed
out you can do so too
your poem is bleak i pray that you ,you change your mind Linda
Thank you for your comment linda, I certainly appreciate it. I know a few of my poems are fairly dark and seem to appear as if I have intentions of harming myself....I assure you that is NOT the case. I only write what comes into my head, and some times its dark. I sincerely appreciate the concern and I apologize for not making it clear in my poetry. I will state before each "dark" poem that it is just a poem.
Again, thank you so much for the comment and concern, they are both very much appreciated.
Oh I sure hope not Pure! You are such a great writer and an aspiring poet, don`t give up! I always enjoy reading your work, it really birghtens up my day. And I know I couldn't possibly know what your going through, but if you need someone to talk to I`m here! You will always have supourt in the Cosmos! All the Best, Your friend, The Fish of the Sea.
Thank you Fish for the comment, I certainly appreciate it.
I know a few of my poems are fairly dark and seem to appear as if I have intentions of harming myself....I assure you that is NOT the case. I only write what comes into my head, and some times its dark. I sincerely appreciate the concern and I apologize for not making it clear in my poetry. I will state before each "dark" poem that it is just a poem.
Again, thank you so much for the comment and concern, they are both very much appreciated.
No probelm Pure, I`m always here for you if you need to talk, still a great write. All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.
I know the hurt inside of you
may be the cause of self
abuse,
but remember people
look up to recognize
you.
You are somebody
you are a friend,
with so much going
for you it’s not
the end.
Remember my friend
I’m here for you,
I feel your dents,
For tomorrow
we wake to
a new day,
and it makes
sense..
~Deb
Thank you Deb, I appreciate your comment
I hope you can call me my friend let’s talk
I appreciate the offer, but I am ok. I know a few of my poems are fairly dark and seem to appear as if I have intentions of harming myself....I assure you that is NOT the case. I only write what comes into my head, and some times its dark. I sincerely appreciate the concern and I apologize for not making it clear in my poetry. I will state before each "dark" poem that it is just a poem.
Again, thank you so much for the comment and concern, they are both very much appreciated.
Call me my brother! My poetic friend!
DEB!!!!!!!
.....I called you lol
Call me call me !
your my friend,
I’m here for
you now,
forever til,
the end! ?
Your pen glides through your poems with such a silky smoothness.
I know the last time I expressed my concern, you eased my mind a little. Now I am worried about you. You can see from the above comments how you have friends here on Cosmo who would willingly chat to you on private message. I, too, am able and willing to chat with you anytime. There are people who DO care! You do not have to face this crisis alone! Please, please dont do anything to harm yourself in any way. Talk. We are here for you x
Thank you Being Me for your continued concern and your comment, they are appreciated.
I know a few of my poems are fairly dark and seem to appear as if I have intentions of harming myself....I assure you that is NOT the case. I only write what comes into my head, and some times its dark. I sincerely appreciate the concern and I apologize for not making it clear in my poetry. I will state before each "dark" poem that it is just a poem.
Again, thank you so much for the comment and concern, they are both very much appreciated.
Aww nooh although this is expressed in awesome flow and great rhyme because of your fine talent I hope this is just a poem of despair days but you are neither going to stop writing such awesome poems nor wishing for death sir. Just keep writing as we admired what we read. And many can relate to it. Kudos and goodnight, it's bedtime here.
Thank you S. Zaynab, I certainly appreciate that kind comment. And yes, you are very correct, I do not wish for Death......I just write about it. I often ask myself why do THOSE lines pop into my head...where they will remain until written down. But, I very much thank you for your time to read my poem and to comment.