My Hoary Home
My eyes behold bright hues of red tucked warmly here in tufted bed.
This fever burns, my thoughts explode, I drift along deathβs dusty road.
Do I deserve such bitter fate, whilst hopeless fools now congregate
around a hole dug deep in Earth? Why was I here, what was my worth?
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Iβve bled for justice, lived through strife, so confident about my life.
But death will not depart from me, so now I'll go, regrettably.
Not having done all I could do to tend to love, find someone who
would be behind me through it all; I learned quite quick to break the fall.
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Although I leave here all alone, my heart is full for having known
that you were once so dear to meβthat you and I loved endlessly.
Your memory lingers, softly scented, Jasmine wafts, discontented;
sweetness cannot find a place to bequeath such ambrosial grace.
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Now, light as air, I rise above, my broken dreams, all those I love,
like floating feathers on the wind, that canβt control where currents send
them drifting on, βtis now the day, Iβll neβer return, thus whisked away.
An earthen hollow, deep in loam, will now become my hoary home.
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Comments
??? love this Dean ???
Thanks so much for reading, Wayne.
I'm very pleased to know that you enjoyed it.
~Dean
The brilliant movement of this piece..... its near sing-song rhythmic lilting took me away ......far into the intent of the author...... the dying man floating through his memories... and then... in the final verse...... floating away into the ether of his existence.....friggin' BRILLIANT dear brother poet!!..... Bravo!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
You've nailed my intended meaning perfectly with your interpretative review, Tony.
I sincerely appreciate that and I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem.
All the best, buddy!
~DeanΒ :}
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Beautifully penned, the somber genre is very enlightening.Β
Thank you very much for reading as always, Lisa.
I'm glad you found this...enlightening.
Hugs! ?
~DeanΒ ;)
Wow.. very touching..