Poem -
My love my life
To my babies I am sorry
i was always
In a hurry
Running to jobs
I had to do
That took my time
away from you
I needed something
For my pain
And didn't think of you
What a selfish thing for
A mother to do
Now I sit alone
In a room thats always dark
I tore our worlds apart
Searching for a sign of you
Your voice your smell
Are hidden well
No cuddles laughs or smiling eyes
I'm punished for my
Greedy lies
As I look up to see
Your no longer here with me.
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Comments
Wow JESSICA!!..... this a VERY compelling piece!!...... the depth of loss and grief powerfully conveyed......a strong sense of rhythm and timing helping the entirety flow beautifully.......a mother's loss is profound in any context and in this poem even more so!!......ALL STARS!!..... well done sweet poetess!!...... and .......WELCOME to COSMO!!.... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳
Thank you very much thats very kind of you
Wow !!, An amazing price of writing ,all stars to you ??? , the depth of emotion you put into writing compels the reader and inflicts emotions soon them , great start , and welcome to cosmofunnel !
good luck for the future
sparkling love Emma
Thank you