My Story Be Told
"My Story Be Told" (Page #1)
I
tell my story for the world to hear,
Neither
rhyme nor reason just to make myself clear.
Life
full of consequences,
Due
to situations and bad times.
Some
pages may be obscured,
And
others with crossed out lines.
As
I stepped into this world,
Leaving
what ifs, behind.
I
began life on this journey,
Not
knowing what I’d find.
so
i gave myself a lecture,
Depending
solely on my game.
If
all fell through tomorrow,
I
would have no one else to blame.
So
I set and talked with my maker,
As
we decided on my plan.
The
tribulations of my tomorrows,
I
can expect to count, on both hands..
He
starred at me and I at he,
As
he measured my every move.
This
life you gave, i'll live to the fullest,
And
to you only have I to prove.
You
shook my hand, you led out this man,
And
my quest had just began.
As
I stepped outside,
This
heat not to be denied.
My
best be completed, rain or shine.
No
time shall I mar, thumbs up so far,
No
sounds to be heard but mine.
I
walked till dark, had to make my mark,
As
distance and near starts to collide.
Time
not be of waste, as a tralup in haste,
Allowing
nothing, to triumph my pride.
This
venture was a must, to win are bust,
Never
to go, without a clean fight.
Now
at the end of this road, my story be told,
And
failure remains out of sight.......To be continued
Jim
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That was deep I like that my brother.
Hello Joyce,
Appreciate the compliment and welcome to the site.
Best regards,
Jim
Thank you.
great story you have to be told jim from all you have been through from beginning to now you are a life's soldier battling against all the odd's and keep on going not letting anything get you down full of respect and love and honesty im glad iv'e got to know the heart you have all the best
tina x
And for you Ms.Tina,
The same and more be my clam to you and all that has come to know and of you can and do without a doubt,shares my sentiments and deep sincere love for you as well. You have become a true inspirational beacon, shining brighter than the stars you have collected amongst your presence...Stay who you are and forever not change for anyone..
The warmest of all regards,
Jimmy
Wow Chris,
You just laid out a lovely rendition to anther poem, you really quoted that extremely well and allowed me to understand my own poem even better.Thank you my friend and you have a great touch reading the analogies of poems and you placed it out there like a true champ.Thank you sincerely my friend you gave me my own poem in a nut shell...In you i am honored and inspired...
With the utmost respect,your friend,
Jim
thats really good.
Appreciate that Keith and welcome to Cosmo Funnel, did not get a chance to greet you earlier and your poems are quite interesting as well.
Jim
great poem really deep and mind opening i enjoyed it congrats
Appreciate that Asmaa and you know how i feel about your works, you are amazing, that which you place on paper from your pen, simply magical.....
Jim
your welcome and you're complements are always appreciated thank!
I really enjoyed the read of your poem, jimmy. Very nice. May god bless you.
hasnain
Thank you dear sir,
Your words speaks volumes of all the character you exuberates.
Jim
great write Jim congrats x
Thank you Susan......
Hi Jimmy, yes we all have a story to be told you did a fabulous job at telling your story. Great poem!
Thanks Kiesha,
Really appreciate your compliment...
Take Care,
Jim
Jimmy, have you read my dream of success yet? My goal is to write poem and hopefully take action in my community to make the world a better place.
Hey Kiesha,
Way to go with the community project, that is a big task to tackle and for one brave person to handle, i really commend you,(whole heartedly) but then, that is where it starts, (one person), willing to make a difference, in their (large) community but not only will you be making a difference there and at that particular moment, yours will be one made, in the lives of all those in need, to come even afterwards and i bet you will succeed with this unselfish endeavor....I am headed towards your dream at this time, thanks for the offer to read it..
Kindest Regards,
Jim
Hey Kiesha,
Way to go with the community project, that is a big task to tackle and for one brave person to handle, i really commend you,(whole heartedly) but then, that is where it starts, (one person), willing to make a difference, in their (large) community but not only will you be making a difference there and at that particular moment, yours will be one made, in the lives of all those in need, to come even afterwards and i bet you will succeed with this unselfish endeavor....I am headed towards your dream at this time, thanks for the offer to read it..
Kindest Regards,
Jim
This is great as always Jimmy :) really like it. I do some work with guys in prisons and they would love this poem. Would it be okay to copy it out and bring it into them on my next visit? Let me know, no problem if your not happy about it.
WELL DONE.. great poem. x
P.S. I work in the area of Mental health. :) and work in prisons here in Ireland, some of the time other times im work in groups and hospitals. Tks let me know. :)
It would be my pleasure Louise and i as well work with mental health patients, as well and have been working with juveniles, that has been incarcerated for various crimes, including crimes that have taken the lives of others here in Florida....Very good hearing from you and will contact you once again when back in Florida..Spending a little time away from home and the computer but still will communicate, with cosmo funnel, through my iphone. I have embarked on an endeavor, for the poet,(Khan hasnain) at the present, a very good and prominent friend of mine, on this site....Again take care and thanks for the kind words.
Sincerely,
Jimmy
Jimmy,
I really enjoyed this piece of writing. It spoke a powerful
message all the way through. My favorite lines were:
"
So
I set and talked with my maker,
As
we decided on my plan.
The
tribulations of my tomorrows,
I
can expect to count, on both hands..
He
starred at me and I at he,
As
he measured my every move.
This
life you gave, i'll live to the fullest,
And
to you only have I to prove."
Love that you 'look to a higher power'. I also like your
'writing style' here; unique and appealing. Thinking about
trying it. Great write!
Nrose,
Thank you and the right to fill flattered, boast mine,, If you tried it (i am sure), you would derive better results, through your, (delicate), utilization....Nrose, you know, everybody has to bow to somebody, and he,(man above), happens to be my cup of tea...So again, "thank you," Ienjoy your poems and will now, leave my remarks, on your interesting works...See you shortly.......
Warmest Regards,
Jim
This one is amazing!!! <3
Thanks Valerie and to you i am honored and pleased to know, you are well and continue to be strong, in all adversities of life....You are always kept in mind and heart, by us all..........For your have a story that was told and it was one, of sheer amazement, will power, inner strength,internal and external love and support, by those that stand by you daily and of someone, whom has not given up on what (life), has in store for her and how she continue to fight, for what rightfully was given to her, by God, to share with her loved ones, (her life)... Proud of you and will always support you....
Warmest regards,
Jimmy Arnold
Shall they read this on my dying day,
I would be honoured; great piece Jimmy!
Luv Jai :)
You are so kind Jai, appreciate that. I have a whole lot of catch up reading i have to do,(not to mention having to post something as well).Take Care and hope your Xmas bring all the joy, {in one day) that has eluded you in all your life.
Kind regards,
Jim
that has eluded you....
You're making Jai very happy Jimmy,
A few words can make someone happy too,
thank you!
So very true...Some times the most simplest things in life, holds more sentimental value and weight, than that of any precious metal....Such as (your) thank you....Appreciate that and (God bless)...You have high regards on this site jai, from all of your readers and your comments you share, with all and to all, is remarkable as well....Continue to be who you are, it works for you quite well....
Your friend,
Jim
this poem here is for you Jimmy,
God bless you.
Poetry est,
it lives
w
E
A
v
E
S
and breathes
Dance
to poetry
dare to
dream
and sleep,
to the orchestra
of words
and Life
as trees
GROW
in dark,
poetry brings
to light
soul &
path
find the
way
to
the whole
The test
for us
Within us
is
To
Let go
The eternal spirit
Thou Shalt Know
Tu est
the eternal poet
Hey Jai,
My friend, you have many Haiku's in this one..Nature,.Personal experience,and laughter.Very unique poem and very hard to emulate by many. You (juxtaposed)this one well going from a simple view of your subject matter to an expansive view...The manner in which you have tied all of them together and still depict it as one conglamatorial poem, is awesome. I really like your (subject shifts), in this one,(are shall i say this many in one),done quite fluently and quite astonishing.....
Great piece of work,
Jim
Dear Jimmy,I am really moved by this emotional side of yours. I love the way said " I tell my story for the world to hear,Neither rhyme nor reason just to make myself clear".Some pages may be obscured,And others with crossed out lines.AsI stepped into this world, Leaving what ifs, behind
....These lines speaks about the depth in your thought towards the life .Not only me I think most of us have sufferings in our own way,as no one is exempted from it.It's part and parcel of this big game.I thoroughly enjoyed your genius verses poured out so effortlessly.My big round of applause for you.I am inspired by your writing Jimmy. You are magnificent in the field of writing.Looking forward to read more of your work slowly absorbing the wisdom flown out in this cosmos like a sponge.
Cheers.
Piusha.
Hello Piusha,
Such kind words from such a gentle and kind hearted person and i thank you dearly,Piusha..Just as you stated the ways of the world can be cruel sometimes and to echo your sentiments, no one person can be, are is exempt, from it's cruel and torrential, (at times) aftermath but all we can do, to equal the odds, is attempt to make due, with what we have in our basket, to work with and hope the best, bleeds from our efforts, that we have placed forward, in our quest for perfection or just to live, without distractions, in a normally,(God) given life....Thank you once again and your words are always ones of flatter and fulfillment.....
Kindest of all regards,
Sincerely Jimmy
Dear Jimmy,
I am enjoying reading your work, this one drew me in as I too have written a poem of the same title, not in the same league as yours! Hence why I haven't uploaded it, this is perfect, I love how it tells a story and I can feel your strength of character.thank you for adding me as a friend I am honoured.
Maddison
Dear All,
I relate this tribute poem with this " MyStory to be told "
His Alphabets were heart broken
Left leg of “A ” is missing;
Still this is for you dear
To My Beloved Brother,
Jim Arnold Jim
I love you; I trust you; I embrace you;
How do I have to express
How much I love you;
I might make self-conscious to you
From time to time
By giving lots of love and embrace,
Words were sentenced for a
Life-long imprisonment;
But you need to know Brother
I love you so much
Before you were born I didn't know
Just how much I would love you so,
But when I heard from your tongue
for the first time, calling me
Dear Brother,
I felt my heart grow and glow;
My Life Pages became dry and dark
A Brother's love is hard to explain,
Not everyone will feel the same.
My unfilled pen trembled to write
Just how much I love you,
Time may pass day after day
or year after year,
My Signature unidentified
But the love I have for you grows
nearer and dearer to my heart;
Each day and year.
To My dear Brother,
I hope you know
Just how much I love you so.
MY Cover page is torn-out
My last page of my book ends:
Lovingly your own Brother…
WILLIAMS GEORGE MAVELI
Sir Williamsji,
You are a gentleman and a scholar and this poem you placed was a (doozy), your talent is beyond approach and in the manner, in which you pull all of them from your hat of magic, is amazing, just as this one and at the present time, i will just respond with (DITTO) to the very same sentiments but will follow up with a attribute of you and to you, my dear brother and friend, very shortly...
Sincerely,
Your (God) brother Jim Arnold
Sir Jim Arnold Sir,( Brother )
I am just a simple person, keeping a low profile on everything. But, I love to write more and more and to encourage those who love to write, I am happy with all my friends at COSMOFUNNEL. All are my brothers and sisters, God bless them all.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI (Brother)
Brother Williamsji Sir,
More than a simple man you are Williamij..You are a devoted Father, Husband, Poet, Believer in (God) and Friend and to you i render all appreciations and thanks.in the world, just as many,many more on this site and in life in general....
Don't ever change Sir,
Jim.