“My story be told” (Page #2)
“My story be told” (Page #2)
On
this journey, I have embarked, fearless yet all
alone,
No means of support, nor civil contact, not even a
cell phone.
His
promise, he has entrusted and to seek, from far not near,
I
packed my bag with faith and hope and full of survival gear.
With
directions from he, placed secure in hand, destination clear in sight,
ventures
sure to be, of mortal challenge but faith be mine, this lit moon night.
From
the darkness he stepped and gave to me, a message had he drawn,
The
life you seek, for my blood did leak, I’ll lead you from my throne.
About
a mile in my walk, other voices began to talk, tempting each step that I gain,
Trials
you had warned, with sin they were born, the hecklers were clear and plain.
Ignore
them I may, for this life I will stay and conquer, all demons placed at hand,
One
after one they came, throwing accusations and blame, but like you, I will take my stand.
From
the shadows you stepped, my ground surely kept and he without shame, displayed pride,
In
my bag I did dig, my weapon of secret, figs twig, one given, by he who walks my side.
Face
to face we did meet, his goal, was to me defeat, and mine was to show him no fear,
My
road in life will be paved, for to God, my word gave and to you, I will make myself clear.
As
he paced then ran away, his last words we'll meet another day, yet today was mine to own,
He
knew then with God by my side and he nowhere to hide, his temptation and had chance he blown.
This
first nights journey has been long, my faith still full and strong, yet my life’s mission,has clearly just begin,
With
my continuation still at hand, trust placed in this one man, no lost will overshadow, my sought win….............. To be continued
JIM
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Respected Arnold Sir,
Your poems are as an guide lines for me. Actually, I am student of Sir Ravindra Kumar, he taught me up to graduation. Usually I hear the name your's with great respect whenever we discuss about his poems activities on computer.
Thank you,
Yasmeen Bano
Greetings Yaseen
To you dear lady, i am flattered and honored to meet you and Ravindra Kumar, was one of the first Poets i was gracefully honored, to meet on this site and fell heavily in love, with his knowledge and means of writing his poetry.His is poetry and philosophy of times passed but well missed by avid poem lovers. The manner in which he write poetry, is one where, it would be to a readers best interest and advantage, to ensure there is a dictionary close by...I have come to find no other, that recite poems in such high caliber manner, accept my friend Williasji Maveli, whom (both ), i admire and honor dearly and it is these two poets, that i strive to be one day in their class of poetry presentation but for now, all i can do, dear lady, is just as you, quest for their knowledge and respected style, until i have achieved are have come close, to their level of poetic justice.........For you to have studied under Sir Ravindra Kumar, your steps precede mine...Thank you for the honor you have bestowed and i am sure it is you, that can teach me a thing are two about poetry and i look forward to your interjection of poetry, stories, art or what ever, you enjoy involving your interest, to be...Thank you once again Yasmeen and i eagerly await your literary interest...
Kindest and respect in all regards,
Jim Arnold.
Dear Sir,
Unforgettable piece of work in which strong psychology of your deep powerful mind is sprinkled throughout with sweet meaningful arrangement of appropriate words by acceptable streamy device.
Regards,
Ravindra Kumar
Thank you dearly sir and from you, this is an honor........
Kindest of all regards,
Jim
Wow An gel,
All i can say is i don't know which is the poetic revelation, my poem are your wonderfully descriptive, more than a comment, (response)....You really came out of the pocket with this one...Iasked for a little(cents) in this one and you came out giving (dollar bills)
Was so surprised with your response, my finger could not wait until i had finished annotating my response, before it jumped on the save button and to sum this one up, i will just correct it and resubmit....All i can say is i don't know which is the poetic revelation, my poem are your wonderfully descriptive, (more than a comment), response....You really came out of the pocket with this one...I as a beggar, asked for a few (cents) in this one and you came out giving ($100 dollar bills)....You are to kind and i thank you sincerely,
Your friend,
Jim
Your faith is strong Jim and it shines through, you poetry is amazing!
Maddison
Thank you Maddison, sorry for the late response, i did not realized you had comment...Quite the fan of your wonderful works as well..."Many to chose from and all to love."
Sincerely,
Jim
Thank you Maddison, sorry for the late response, i did not realized you had comment...Quite the fan of your wonderful works as well..."Many to chose from and all to love."
Sincerely,
Jim