My Weakness

I see the face you wear all the time—
“They don’t care at all.”
You don’t want any more of us.
Run, thought, run…
Spinning in my mind,
It’s all your fault my child died.
Like a broken record,
Replaying over and over,
But this time, with a knife in sight,
The television hums in the background.
I try to move forward, but everywhere I turn,
Shadows creep in—
Silently, without a sound.
Slowly, they approach,
One hand on my mouth,
One on my shoulder,
Turning their gaze back to my past.
A smirk, knowing my weakness.
From the corner of my eye,
A dark figure watches me,
Writing it all down in the passageway,
Waiting patiently to strike with its claws.
I overhear conversations—
Mother and daughter,
My ears hearing too many untruths,
Anger rising, but a calmer tone steadies the balance.
He’s young, soon to be four,
His laughter brings calm,
Smiles spread across his joyful face,
Fooling around with his giant uncle Jay.
Sweet, comforting sounds.
My heartbeat unsteady,
Now its rhythm slows,
Child, you do not know your worth to me—
The broken me.
Your presence saved me,
Kept me from trembling,
Falling from the sky.
Gwen.P
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Hey GWEN!!....this is the third time I've tried to comment on this write......,keeps disappearing.......I don't know what's up with this!!??.......anyway, VERY powerful dear poet sister!!.......wish I could say more but it won't let me communicate........I feel VERY dramatically drawn to this piece......the loss of a child.......the inexplicable loss of that which is obviously dear to you......so sorry you have to feel broken my friend....but somehow I can feel your pain!!........ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Somehow I feel there is a strange entity in the mix of this write......don't want to say "Ghost" ....but.......a powerful feeling threw me for a loop here.......Tony ??✴✴❤❤✴✴??✴✴???
PS......sorry Gwen......not sure what came over me.......this is NOT like me.....apologies.......your friend and admirer!!......T xo ❤
Haha! Thank you so much Tony, To be honest I am speechless! Thanks for the awesome comment! Honestly thank you and I'll try my hardest to comment on your poems! But sometimes I don't know what kind of words would suit your poem!! Thank you so much :)Â
Wow, this one gave me goosebumps!Â