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Mystical Rain

Mystical Rain

Surreal is an effect that mingles with night,
a piece of serenity that tucks you in tight.
Eloquent sound that slumbers with dreams
and touches emotion even when it's not seen.
Over the rooftops it gives a display,
cooling down warmth on a hot summer day.
The fall of a raindrop so clear and profound,
blending with thunder to give us surround.
Echoes through stillness that cannot be tame
as the dark plays its part in this magical game.
A falling song of a sent lullaby,
while crystal water showers down from up high.
Mother natures presence then passes on by,
after Mystical Rain had fell from the sky.

 

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Marion

Beautiful Susan and I agree there is something so soothing in rain sounds x

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The fish of the sea

I love the rain at night. A poem that explains this feeling so beautifully. Enjoyed Susan! Peace to you

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Tony Taylor

Wow SUSAN.......what a STELLAR write my friend......I LOVE the Chris Spheeris video/song that accompanies this piece....when you listen  as you are reading this...... it REALLY takes the whole thing to another level........ and then.........leaves you on a separate level......where it drops you on the shores  of "Mystical Rain".......a VERY powerful piece of poetic profundity!! (pardon the overdose of alliteration!!.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!....well done dear poet sister!!.....Bravo!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!,,,,,,,,T xo  :  )

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Susan Chetcuti

Thanks Tony for your lovely words, I just saw your comment now😊

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Susan. Just bliss! Tranquil sounds and reading your lines. Fab piece. Pinned! Pxxx

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