Never Whole
A rant
It is so hard to separate logic and feelingÂ
When you try to make them understand but their compassion is fleetingÂ
Although my words are rationalÂ
Their senses are deceivingÂ
And how do you reason to their better nature
When you are not worth an ear to spare
Because they look down on youÂ
There is no logic thereÂ
I roam this world like a cripple in despairÂ
Because I am not truly whole under your judging glares
Yet if I make a Suggestion of equal affairs;
That I’m not so different from you,
You don’t care
And it looks as though I will always beÂ
Second from the first - of which you are -
Oh would you like me to bow?
Your highness supreme
You who knows bestÂ
You stupid shitÂ
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Hello RaquelÂ
it’s always hard when those close seem to misunderstand us, to make us feel judged wrongly because they don’t appear to listen. Ranting/writing can definitely help. I hope it helped you today. I could feel your inner suffering in this writeÂ
All the best
Gwen xÂ
Thank you for this comment (:Â
Hello RAQUEL!.......I can feel the pain being suffered within the declarative phrasing used here....it is truly compelling....and like Gwendoline said.....I do hope that writing.....getting it all out.....helps a bit when having to deal with it head on!!......ALL STARS!!.....keep writing dear poet sister.....you've got skills!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )