Poem -
Night
Evening begins
Night's a mystery
Wonders of stars
How many do I see?
Cool air whizzes through me
From above it shines
Milky and glowy
Canโt touch, want to
Canโt reach, want to
Following me
Just an illusion
Shadows created
Reality
Evenings ending
Night's began
I wonder aroundย
Hoping Iโve won
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Comments
Pratibha what an amazing poem! So atmospheric, so multi-layered, so magical. We want more!
โWell done!ย
Thank you my very first one published online!!
Its very encouraging to do more x
beautiful write, thank you for sharing
Thank you for the comment. Its my first poem published online!
Just one bit of advice...something no one told me when I first started here. Don't become discouraged if you don't get a lot of feedback at first. continue to write and comment on other's work. Remember everyone here can get more focused on receiving feedback rather than giving it. and I'm ashamed to say I can be that way sometimes too. I do strive to return the favor more readily if someone comments a lot and checks in to see if I posted something new
Ok thank you. I wanted to connect with others who write so I'm really looking fwd to reading more on here. It's so fascinating and the types of writing.ย
This one feels exciting and intriguing ?
Thank you swati. It's one of my early fun ones.
wonderful poem
Very good Pratibha - please don't be so good
otherwise you're going to beat me!ย
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Thank you Terry. Glad you like it. Always like the night sky!! It is an old piece now!!
There is far too much good writing on here! I do not think I will beat anyone!!! ? P x
See - you did beat nearly everyone.
Congrats.
terry.
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Thank you kindly Terry. Proper surprised me this. ? Px
Excellent write I agree with poetess because I too have had excellent feedback to having hardly none and I nearly walked away twice, but on here you'll learn and work with others like poetess who are an inspiration to help you more as a writer.ย Good luck.
Hi Simon. Thank you for the stars and like. Much appreciated.ย
Good you are still on this site and enjoying cosmo now x
There is a softness about this poem.. from beginning to end.. a very cool read
well written Pratibha Savani.ย
Thanks for the ink.
Be blessed.
Hi Wilford. Thank you for the comments and like. Good to hear how you felt after reading it. I wrote this as a student so its quite an old write now but so pleased it is making some sounds waves on here ?
Wow beautiful write friend.ย
Thank you Kay xx
This is lovely, Pratibha...congrats on the nomination!
Thank you Being Me x
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Thank you Jill ?
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congratulation on winningย
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Omg Greg I'm truly shocked especially since there is a phenomenal amount of exceptional poems on cosmo. It's really made my day. Thank you for your kind words and support. Px
You are so welcome Iโve been nominated many times but never one yet someday I hope to
Yes you will you are an exceptional writer I'm always reading your stuff even though I've only been on here short while lol!!
Keep writing mate Px
Thank you so much that means a lot to me have a wonderful day
Huge Congratulations Hunnybun โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ โญ๏ธOMG Iโve been so near & yet so far away from ย this ???
Thank you Jill as I mentioned in previous message totally surprised me. Really help encourage me as a poet writer.ย
I love reading your writes really cool fun reads you so would win!!
Naaa donโt think Admin likes my style of rhyming xxx but hey ho I can live in hope & try harder lol โค๏ธ?โค๏ธWell Done my loveโญ๏ธโค๏ธ?โค๏ธ
Thats crazy you have a wicked writing style the queen of narrative!!
I really dont know how they select nominees and winners and there is nothing written on the site either.
Thanks for your comments its most appreciative ? Px
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Awww u r a โญ๏ธLove โค๏ธ?โค๏ธโญ๏ธ
Congratulations on being one of the contest winners with me !!ย ??
Woohoo!! Was totally surprised! Thank you kindly Giampiero ? Px
Congratulations on winning. Beautifully writtenย
Thank you so much ?
Love the expression of the wonders to be had at night.
Thank you kindly John. Me too ?
Tons of Congratulations Pratibha....it's VERY well deserved....gorgeous write...sorry I didn't see this sooner....lots of Love.....T so ??
Thank you kindly Tony and for the pin I am honoured. I think there is always something mysterious and beautiful about the night. Pxย
HOW did I miss this Pratibha??? It is very beautiful, love it, so glad I just came across it...congatulations!!!!.( belated)?
I dont know!! Thank you Marion my liking this piece. It's quite special to me. Px ?
Pratibha, I'm a bit late coming to this party by merely a year and want to thank you for writing something so special with your first poem post.
And what a wonderful and most engaging and also colourful write you have shared.
You perfectly encapsulate night and the nocturnal mystique around it and what it has to offer to on lookers.
And reading some of the other superb members comments, I guess congratulations are in order (a tad late) for you and your magical poem.
So.
Salutations!! to you Pratibha and well done with your debut poem!!โค๏ธโญ๏ธ.
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