Poem -
Noise
noise-the quality of lacking any predictable order or plan
The opponents of reason
Wage war in my mind
And I charge you with treason.
Tortured by vicious comments
Abused with your hate
Your touch is void, and torments
Thought we'd spend life together
Absent never here
I'm falling to the nether
Shattered, a pile of pieces
A puzzle of pain
Reconstruct 'til life ceases
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Stephen! There is a torrent of emotion as you define NOISE in this write. Shattered, disjointed and full of torment. Love your last line…"a puzzle of pain reconstruct 'til life ceases". Great write!
val
hey there Valerie!
thanks so much! ive gotta steer away from the doom and gloom! hard to do sometimes, especially when your in the midst of it!
thanks so much for taking time to read and respond! I do appreciate it greatly!
wish you well
This is very well written! It's very expressive of pain in a very relatable way. I wish you the best that today can bring!
you are always so kind enigma! thank you for that!
and thank you for the wish!
hope you are well!
thanks again
You are very welcome! I wish the same for your tomorrow! :-)
beautiful construction of a painful
moment; deserves a few reads and
A good few nominations:)
thank you jai!
I greatly appreciate your comments!
really enjoyed reading this piece job well done mate
hey jimmy
thanks a lot for your time and comment!
I appreciate you!
take care