Poem -
Oasis
Like a weary traveler
Walking through the desert
With dry sand burning his throat
Scorching sun whipping his back
Chapped heels and parched lips
And an overwhelming thirstÂ
I’m the oasis who gives him water
Quenching his thirst and refreshing him
Giving him the strength to carry on
A quiet and still water I am
To be there for him in moments when
It seems as if he can no longer carry on
I’m his oasis…
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My Sweet Rose,
She is not a mirage
He comes to her having traversed the sands of the Kalahari
He suffers from his journey
Slowly, she hydrates him back to health
First, the tears from her heart, quench his thirst
Second, the love from her soul, brings him the strength to carry on
For, she is surely
"His Oasis"
Love you,
Daddio xxx
Sweet Daddio....Your beautiful words made me smile...Thank you very much
Love you loads
My darling this is simply beautiful, so well written and very well thought out. I`m so proud of my beautiful little Rosebud.
I love you to the stars forever
Mummy xx
Thank you very much Mum...It's rewarding to know you're proud of me...It's like a pat on my back!
Love you to the moon and back!!
Hi  Sweet Rose what a beautiful pieceÂ
a lovely compassionate way to tellÂ
someone you are always thereÂ
Enjoyed this very muchÂ
Lots of love DebsÂ
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Yaaay!!...It really feels good to have you back!! I've missed you....Thank you very much for your ever encouraging words...I'm glad you enjoyed it
Lots of love
Sweating for awhile.....enjoyed reading....Thank you RoseÂ
Thank you very much Lorris
Hi Rose,
Sounds very religiously inclined in this piece my friend and can be presented in more ways than one..From the aspects of (God) or through the admirable devotion of a dedicated (loved one)..No matter what the obstacles placed before you, as long as faith is to be held, in his belief and capabilities, you will always prosper in his name sake.... (or)... No matter what ventures, we have laid before us, you are not alone and i, (as your other half), wiIl be there to see you through this journey and any other....Love the devotion allowed to bind this cementitious, relationship.....Jim Â