ON GRIEF
Breathless in pain, a shock to her being
bitterness and anger, an all consuming feeling
Why had death taken her, why? why? why?
she felt so alone, all she did, was cry
Memories for now, held no soothing balm
she needed to be held, her emotions to calm
People kept telling her in time you will heal
her thoughts.., please don`t tell me how i`ll feel
Though, as time wore on the sorrow it did become less
her grief eased, the weeping, she was able to suppress
she would still have days where she`d love and miss
her smile, being wrapped in her arms her tender kiss
Grief has no time scale no boundaries it just appears
you mourn for your lost loved one, until the fog clears
And this is where those memories, come in to play
they ease those questions, of why they could not stay
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Deborah, I felt this to my core. I lost my sister almost two years ago. Cancer took her and she was so young and beautiful with an amazing soul. I almost have to block those ending days to make it in this world. The anger and frustration fueled some blasting conversations with God. Sorry, this isn't about me but your writing is so powerful...so full of the reality of loss and grief that I wanted to let you know you touched my heart...xo
Love to you for healing in all ways...xo
Hi Tracey So sorry to hear about your sister( Hugs)
This one is about the loss of my mother the way i felt initially
the days and months after she passed.
The grief is all consuming it takes over your whole being i think
I wanted to write about the grief to share how i felt
with the ending lines more on a positive note that it does
get better even though you will always love and miss your loved one
Thank you for your kind words
Best wishes to you Debs xo
This made me cry DEBS!!..... I've lost two sisters.....one recently....... every single line of this..... was wrenching to me........ Grief is personal...... and we all handle o differently....... but the common ground is filled with tears........PINNED........well done my dear soul!!.......hugs-n-kisses........T xo. ?✳✴☀
Hi Tony Aww big hugs I am sorry for the loss of
your two sisters,As i said to Cherie i lost a friend
last week, and all the feelings came flooding back
how i felt when i lost my mam
I wanted to say here in my poem the pain in grief
can get better in time
Thank you for your heartfelt words my friend
Love n hugs Debs xo
Hi Debs such a heartfelt poem of loss and grieving. Well written with love x
Hi Wendy Thank you for stopping by
and for your kind comments
Best wishes Debs x
My Dear Debs,
The saddest grief in some hearts, will never go away
For they are broken into pieces, with pain that's there to stay
Sometimes a treasured memory, will bring some too short lived relief
But with the return of their reality, again appears their grief
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Hi Dear Larry Thank you for your
lovely words as always
Love n hugs Debs xox
Such a sad piece Debs but one that people can relate to- we all have suffered loss and you describe it beautifully. Lovely imagery created.
Peace and love xxx
Lodigiana
Hi Lodigina Yes when I wrote this one, my thoughts were of everyone
who has suffered loss, and I was trying to say in time, the grief
that is felt can ease
Thank you for your kind words much appreciated
Peace and love to you Debs xx