" ON..CLOUD NO. 9 !?" X

" YOU ALWAYS PUT ME ON CLOUD NO. 9 !
YOU DO IT TO ME , EVERY TIMEÂ
YOU MAKE MY BODY FEEL SO DIVINE !
I LONG FOR US TO BECOME ENTWINEDÂ
AS UPON YOUR NAKED FLESH I CLIMB
WHERE YOUR EAGER BODY, WISHES I WOULD DINE
ARREST ME IF LOVING YOU, IS SUCH A CRIME?
BUT, DO NOT REMOVE ME FROM CLOUD NO. 9
THE MOST BEAUTIFUL SENSATION
THAT IS ALMOST SUBLIME !?
AS I SURE KNOW. I,M IN FOR SUCH A GOOD TIME
AS OUT OF YOUR ARSE SHINES THE SUN
& YOUR SO ADDICTED TO MY BUMÂ
YOU ALWAYS PUT THE F INTO FUN
SO ITS TO THE STARS & BEYONDÂ
HERE WE BLOODY COME
ROLLING IN THE CLOUDSÂ
FAR AWAY FROM THE MADDING CROWDS
HAVING SO MUCH FUN!
WITH NO WHERE ELSE, LEFT TO RUN
TAKE ME TO HEAVEN HONEY
& GET THE SENSUAL DEED DONEÂ
OR UNTIL WE BOTH REACH
OUR Â OUTER THIS WORLD, OBLIVION !"
Tracy Timothy xx
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I'm flying having read this !!! Â :)
xox
no peeping on cloud no. 9 .....kinky lol xx cheers RichardÂ
 LOL  I'll have to find my own cloud where I can do as I wish !!!   :)
on no. 8 lol x
Sounds my sort of cloud !!!
Good view from there ! Â :)
X
lol x birds eye viewÂ
:) Â xox
Heavenly and Fresh !!!!!!!!!!
cheers Mark. congrats on the A.O.M title
thank you
no worries ..i,m still bemused as to the criteria for such a title ??????
Making love is like floating on a cloud, away from it all compromise ourselves to the senses, although always the danger of opening eyes fall into the void. A very evocative poem, is a pity that it is written in capital letters, in reading the letters sound like cries. A greeting.
Thanks for your imput Lucas... its in caps so it stands out from the rest i do not see the problem with it myself ?