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One for one (Still Hope)

Song Poem

One for one (Still Hope)

Hi everyone this poem is a tribute and based on a song (not the one in the title ;)). I know it's far beyond my best work, but hope you enjoy! Sorry for the structure too... difficult to edit on phone.

Wrote 10 verses,
Deleted them too.
Because nothing stands out to me
Not as much as you.

Fall asleep in my arms,
My comforting embrace,
Arms wrapped around,
I was at home, it was fate.

Pull me closer when I`m far,
Lift me higher when I`m falling
Carry me when I`m crawling
Be with me as you were in the start.

I don`t give a damn what they say,
It`s you and me just all the way.
And I don`t live for all the hate
No one stands just for the taste of pain.

So live it up, live it up, live it more now
I`m giving up, giving up, giving in, for you
I`m saving up, saving up, bringing you close.
Not tossing in the towel – still hope

So, breathe me in, breathe me in, just feeling the air
I`m sure enough, sure enough, sure enough – not scared
They tell us, telling us, saying for me to go
I`m just laughing, just chuckling  – still hope

Because we are sailing away on our boat
Trying to find the reasons we cope
But I know it`ll be alright
Just sleep with me

In my arms
Through the night.
The Fish of the Sea
 

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sparrowsong

Hello TFOTS...

Very sweet and beautiful write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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The fish of the sea

Awww thanks Sparrow! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Best wishes to you! TFOTS 

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Being Me

Wow!  I really like this, Max. What a fabulous job you have made of this. Very, very well done 👏👏👏 x

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The fish of the sea

Wow Tina! Your praise means a million to me. Thanks so much poetic friend! Best wishes to you also, your friend Max

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Marion

Excellent words Max....kind of just let's forget the world....kind of feel...would make great lyrics too...hugs đź’•

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The fish of the sea

Thanks so much Marion! I'm glad you liked it. Hit the nail on the head with your comment. Kind regards, your friend Max

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Luma

This was very beautiful Fish! I loved every bit of it! - Luma xo

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