Bearing the burden of life isnโt easy..
I donโt totally agree with โOnly the strong survive.โ
Because ultimately.. we all shall die.
Be encouraged.
It is not about strength... It sort of... meansย that no one can understand or feel the exact kind of pain another person is feeling because every person is completely different and yet there aren't many words for pain and loneliness...ย and also every lonesome person can end their lives at any second or any place...ย
Sorry for my rusty English and thank you for you kind words... ๐๐น๐ปโค
Your English is just fine Payam.
That was just my dim understanding of what read.
forgive me of misreading..
But to me, poetry is like the ocean..
so many waves.
Nevertheless.
Do have a splendid day.
First of all, you have no idea how much I appreciate you and everyone else here for reading my poems and sharing your honest thoughts with me... it literally means a world to me... ๐๐๐โคโคโค
I don't think there is such a thing as wrong or right here... every person gets different feelings from a writing or a view or even a photo and that is one of few absolutely beautiful part of humanity's rather disappointing existence...
Your comment was full of light and I'll be even more honored if you read more of my writings and share your thoughts...ย
Thank you ๐๐ป๐นโค
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Hello Payam...
โโโโโPrayerfully only my body will be down...
I wouldn't mind being a Phoenix Rising...
We don't write it...
If we don't right it...
Where do we go from here?
It never belonged to us in the very first place...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
And as always I appreciate you reading it
Thank you Sparrowsong ๐น๐๐ป
Bearing the burden of life isnโt easy..
I donโt totally agree with โOnly the strong survive.โ
Because ultimately.. we all shall die.
Be encouraged.
It is not about strength... It sort of... meansย that no one can understand or feel the exact kind of pain another person is feeling because every person is completely different and yet there aren't many words for pain and loneliness...ย and also every lonesome person can end their lives at any second or any place...ย
Sorry for my rusty English and thank you for you kind words... ๐๐น๐ปโค
Your English is just fine Payam.
That was just my dim understanding of what read.
forgive me of misreading..
But to me, poetry is like the ocean..
so many waves.
Nevertheless.
Do have a splendid day.
First of all, you have no idea how much I appreciate you and everyone else here for reading my poems and sharing your honest thoughts with me... it literally means a world to me... ๐๐๐โคโคโค
I don't think there is such a thing as wrong or right here... every person gets different feelings from a writing or a view or even a photo and that is one of few absolutely beautiful part of humanity's rather disappointing existence...
Your comment was full of light and I'll be even more honored if you read more of my writings and share your thoughts...ย
Thank you ๐๐ป๐นโค
Thank you so much Baker... As always ๐๐นโค