Poem -
Orchards
Mistakes.
Errors.
Share the.
Tracers.
Shoot me.
To Hell.
Judgement.
That`s fair-er.
Poseidon`s.
Decisions.
Reckless.
Envision.
To pain the process.
The problem.
The focus.
Sprockets, the chain.
Lost, awake.
Dreaming, better days.
That have only just begun.
Pull the rope.
Can`t push it apart.
Yet they.
Have Orchards for eyes.
And a sponge.
For a heart.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Comments
What does those sponges soak up?! love that ending to an outback perception! nice write my elusive friend!.........Jim
Ahh so very true, bit of a softie for open endings. Thanks so much Jim, been a bit busy lately with summer school for uni and all. Only came up with it in the shower once again! Peace and smiles my friend. Hope you are well. Kind regards. Max
With orchards comes beautiful blossom so the idea of orchards in the eyes is an inspired perception! Very original and extremely creative. Love it Max đź‘Ť x
Awww thanks so much Tina. I love trying to pin my poems with new phrases. I find it a really fun part of poetry. Kind regards to you my friend. Hope you are well. Your friend MaxÂ
You put 'nonsense' in the poetry genre , This is anything but nonsense , A great rolling powerful lyrical read , Read by someone with a great voice (ruling me out !!) These awesome words would make a great oratory , Well done on a smashing write sir/madam !!
That's quite a comment! Thank you my friend. Perhaps in nonsensical I mean more left open ended for the readers imagination. But really it means so much to me to hear such feed back. I'm really glad you liked it. Please, call me Max my friend ;)~ Kind regards and smiles.