Our Dad and the Sea

our dad and the sea
tan and lean we’d follow him,
voice and gait he’d guide us in, past
rocky cliffs, down canyon path,
all barefoot clad, we loved our dad.
on a secret beach far from home,
under the hawks and feathered clouds,
on tar crossed sand, against the wind,
boys girls him, all played to win.
there the ocean knew and called us in,
the dolphins, seals and pelicans,
the rush of waves, the feel of kelp,
the glow that lingers on the skin.
then time for fire, wood from the sea
and drinks kept cold in holes dug near,
his songs to sing and stories tell,
of “mice and men” and “gunga din”.
we’d gather round and wait our turn for
chile, hot tortillas crisp, and butter brown
charred slathered things, warmed by the
flames, we’d find our rock and then "dig in".
before dusk approached and wind grew
cold, we’d hear about the brave and true,
by his voice from memory or book,
of those who gave and those who took
till the sun burned orange horizon red and
the cliffs threw shadows, and the tide crept in,
we’d live in his stories and forget about his sins,
to love him forever, for a thousand things.
without a clock, the time would come
to pack up our stories, and all we brought in.
dusted with sand and marked with tar,
we’d trek up, seemed forever, to the car.
at the old rail trestle at the end of the climb,
we’d turn to look back to our dad and the sea,
and the moment lingered, as the sunset glimmered,
and we’d gather in the moment, one more time.
still long years after, from the trestle I hear, white
waves gently splashing, and voices draw near,
and then climbs a vision, tan lean and together, in
bright saltwater colors, all us and ever,
our dad and the sea.
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Oh what a beautiful poem! You take us right there, to the moment, with your words. Brilliant x
Dear Tina,Â
it appears I may never have thanked you for taking a moment to spend a day at the beach with me and mine, the dolphin, seals and pelicans. i am very grateful that you enjoyed it. thank you!
I dont cry easily .. it usually takes something very big .. but having now read these fine words on several occasions and back on back, I now however, find my self involuntarily leaking from both eyes ..Â
I don't know why only Tina and me have left something of ourselves behind .. but I sure hope that others shall now brave the water and follow in the wake we have created .. these words are so deserving of having light thrown upon them ... NevilleÂ
Dear Neville,
Your note brought me back here for a visit, it is a good “remember”. I just poured two fingers over 1 good cube of ice. I’ll toast you now on behalf of my dad.  He would have very much enjoyed your writing and your poetry.
There were nine of us, 7 boys and 2 girls. My father was an artist, who also loved the written and spoken word. He had an uncanny ability to recite from memory, whole poems or long stretches of prose or verse, from the Greeks to the present, to entertain or enlighten, to bring smiles, or tears.
It seemed all people, no matter their background or status or station in life, gravitated to him, felt connected to him. Â If he did not live according to the faith of his catholic birth, he was a good rending of the kind of man described in Kipling's "If".
Now just 2 more fingers, a cube of ice, and a toast to both you and him.
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Dear Mark...this is so much more than a memory...it is pure love, written on a page with such feeling and eloquence and respect. I can't praise this write enough and don't know how I missed it. Simply stunning...X
Thank you Marion, your note made me smile. i like to return to this one from time to time.