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Out Of The Depths

Out Of The Depths

She'll show her awakening as dawn breaks the night,
a slumber so wrong has been somehow made right.
Majestic and worn she had battled the stage,
becoming a shell in Sea's bottomless cage.

Those down in the deep hear her echoing cry,
this mystical presence seen passing them by.
A sudden disturbance she's taken control,
once dormant Titanic has salvaged her soul.

An eloquent touch that's unsettled the grave,
from whispers of those who just couldn't be saved.
In the darkest of depths as she fuels on each breath,
no longer her memory will linger in death.

With rapture the grave starts to give up its claim,
Titanic emerges to take back her name.
The ocean it battles but will not hold back,
this ship more determined in staying on track.

Her beauty and grace unveil with a twist,
while two lovers kiss sailing on through the mist.
Ensuring her name flaunts this new epic tale,
each ghost of her past haunts the winds for its sail.

 

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Samantha

This is so beautiful! Amazing job!

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Tony Taylor

Wow SUSAN!!.... what a great presentation of all the elements here..... great pic, great choice with Céline, great write ~ beautiful phrasing perfectly formatted...... LOVE everything about this sweet poetess!!....... Congrats on the nod from administration!!......ALL STARS!!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✳✴☀

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Susan Chetcuti

Thanks so much for your kind comments. I just had to write it. Titanic will never be forgotten. You have made my day:)

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Leah Yodico

Lovely,,  reminiscing Titanic ## perfect choice of picture and wow!!  Celine Dion? , one of the great singers of all time ## perfect ## congrats on the nomination ##

cheers 
Leah 

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