Poem -
Patricia is a hurricane
Hey Patricia I remember when
I first saw you on the dance-floor
You had my blood pumping
As your hips swayed with the music;
one with the rhythm like a belly dancer
Stealing my soul away
One piece at a time;
lethal were your gyrations
The thought of your sweet affection
Stirred me; as Queen Bee stirs the nest
Though your heart was untameable
And I could see the sky crimson around you
With the southern wind picking up trees
I still gave you all my love and fell to your knees
We laughed together for a while
Looking into your eyes
Was my favorite point of view
Until I saw your lethal knowing smile
Telling me you were only passing through
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Comments
Barry thanks mate, and ain't that the truth; we'll all had one or two like that; those are the ones you remember forever; they do a lot of damage...cheers
Lol sister Cherie, I sense no sympathy coming from you...not sure if I would give myself much sympathy either to be honest, glad you enjoyed and I did try to keep it lite and airy (suddenly I'm hearing my favorite Carole King song 'it's too late'...I have to do this; ...'it's too late baby yes it's too late though we really did try to make it something inside has died and... I can't fake it'...had to do that to remove the song from my mind; sorry...hey thanks for comment sis...
Hey Susan, how r u? Lol interesting commentary as usual, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the encouragement as well...it was certainly a fun write for me, much love sis. and thanks again for taking the time to make a comment
Flower, I'm that transparent? Lol...fire hot, fire burn...fire good...hey all I want is world peace and happy smiling people...you're the best, Flower...hey you and Lily gonna do another write together? I 'm going to keep requesting it, just saying....cheers pal