Perfect Storm
Yiyan Endorsement and Apology
Please read Yiyan`s Poem Freedom Not Free!
The pain I have caused.
Pounds the roof like rainfall.
It tickles at the window seals
And creeps under the doors.
Water all around.
You can bail if you like.
Cover up with false lies.
Say words out of spite.
It's pointless.
Because of no matter what.
You`ll drown.
In your actions.
I`m not here to criticize.
I`m not here to judge.
I`m not here to ponder.
Or swing a punch.
I`m only here. For Marionβs Hugs (Not intended to be creepy! ???)
And Tina`s kind words. (You know its more than that π)
For Lisa`s talent. (Absolutely amazing)
For Jimβs aid to hurt. (Again, thanks so much)
So I`m sorry,
If I hurt you,
By keep writing I say!
Because your poems are some.
That lifts me up and inspire me every day.
I`m sorry Yiyangβ¦
Let`s reconcile together.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Comments
Sorry if you weren't mentioned, a poem of thanks will be coming out soon, but I didn't want to over indulge when this is dedicated to Yiyan. I appreciate everyone's support equally! That's all, please read his poem. Kind regards. The Fish of the SeaΒ
Oh ..you are such a softie. I have read all those comments and they are not so bad ...nothing to worry about Mr Fish...it can be very difficult to converse properly online because we can't see body language..but I still think people's personality comes across pretty well love...nothing to worry about in yours...hugs?? π...π
Yes, so true Marion, it really is, things can be misinterpreted so easily, I`m going to take more care in my future comments. And that's so kind of you to say. Your support always means so much to me. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Oh, Fish, what a lovely thing to do; to apologise and then apologise again with this rather sweet poem. I have read Yiyan's poem and I could see clearly you meant no nastiness or accusations x
Aww thanks so much Tina, and for your support, I never mean to harm and this poem was the least I could do... Thanks for your kind and generous comment. Keep on keeping on! Kind regards, your friend, The Fish of the Sea.
Oh, I keep on all the time!Β Keeping on is what I do best π€£π€£π€£ x
I so agree Tina! this is a wonderful display of humility and grace! The hand of true friendship being extended, what a wonderful example !!!
Thanks, Jim, I just hope he accepts my apology... Thanks so much for your support, it really means so much. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Hello FISH!!.....I haven't been privy to precisely what's going on here but it's plain to see that this is quite the lovely kindness......to take the time to do something kind for another writer is what this site is all about....when I first arrived here in 2014 this used to be such a tight knit community and it's efforts like yours here today that help to restore this site to its former glory!!.....ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!....well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoΒ : )
Awww thanks so much Tony, and yes a simple misunderstanding...you kind comments are always so very appreciated. Kind regards. The Fish of the SeaΒ
There is somewhat a hard bit to commenting on other's work. Sometimes things can get misconstrued. You don't want to hurt by being too harsh, it comes across sometimes as harshness or ignorance. The internet can't portray body language and it can't help you read another's intent. I think and this is only my own observation, that you Fish are a super sweet fella and you don't have a mean bone in your body. It is so heartening to read such a talented poet.
Amen on internet communication so difficult it can be... but awww that means so much that you think that of me... really touching ;)... your support and comments always mean so much Lisa. Best wishes to you, kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Aww thanks so much Flower Girl, awesome to see you back online! Kind regards. The Fish of the SeaΒ
I love this! Amazing use of wording and I love the way you express it,
you're very talented!
kind words also and it's really nice that you went out of you're way to apologise to a poetΒ
Sometimes people can misunderstand and take things the wrong way,
You shouldn't worry about that though :)Β
Just be yourself :)Β
Stay awesomeΒ
Awww thanks so much Edel! Yeah so very true it's really hard to communicate your true meaning over the internet. Thanks so much though, it really means so much that you have taken the time and effort to post on a previous write. So very much appreciated. Kind regards. Best wishes to you! G'day from Aus, The Fish of the SeaΒ