Poem -
Perpetual Beauty
Gentle gazeĀ
Amazed -
- I seek your wisdom
Ā
Your ways of thinking -
- I am drinking up yourĀ Ā wondrous lightĀ Ā
Yet you sit silently bleedingĀ
Intent on believing -
- Your light has fadedĀ
Left you jadedĀ
But all I see
Looking at me -
- Is a radiant ray of perpetualĀ Ā beauty
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Comments
nice
Thanks :)Ā
wonderful poem
Thanks so much Greg š
This is such a beautiful read...kind of joyous...š
Hello Marion š» thank you for your kind words on my poem š
Perpetual gift! enjoyed the write.........................Jim
Jim, what a beautiful comment. Ā Thank you ever so much for reading my poem and liking it šš»
Hi GWENDOLINE!!.....I haven't read you for quite some time......so glad I caught this one.....I have written many poems on this subject matter.....and I must say that you've captured something quite powerful here.....and I believe it can be attributed to your formatting and the succinctness of phrasing.....it makes a profound effect on the minds eye of the reader!!......ALL STARS!!.....Bravo!!......well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xoĀ : )
Tony :) you flatter me and make me beam inside, with your thoughtful comment. Yes I have been away. So pleased to see you are still here writing wonderful work. Really pleased you enjoyed this little piece today. Love and rockets š right back at you, you wonderful human šš»
Hello Gwendoline,
Iām not surprised PBĀ has so many positive comments, you reveal us all so well!
Your writing reminds me of something someone said years ago, it was a compliment to a meal IdāĀ prepared...
"Ummm, tastes like more.āĀ
Well...
Reads like more
deliciousĀ š
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Hello BillĀ
I canāt thank you enough for your thoughtful feedback. It is always so encouraging to receive such kind words. I am thrilled you liked it š and I love that āreads like moreāĀ
thank you so much š»
Gorgeous poem, so well written and oozing with creativity. Beautifully uplifting with the last three lines at the end. Fantastic poetry ā¤ā
Awe thank you ever so much for checking this one out lovely š really pleased you liked it ā¤ļøxx