Wow GWENDOLINE!!....like Marion said.....this packs a powerful punch....and so succinct in its delivery!!.......wow again!!........hope you're ok love!....yLOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo
Hello love...so glad the pack a punch came through. I wanted it to be short but with a pang. Some pains just constantly come back and hit us again don’t they. So glad it came across in this write xx
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The wound was washed with salt today
Caused the eyes to sting
Made the mind detest the light
And every living thing"
Made my heart scream
against every beam
My soul believed
in the bright lights gleam
Ying and yang
torn at the seam
My mind reminded me
from the "Perpetual Pain"
My life has been
a sky filled with scars
Battles lost more than won
when will it be done?
Light at the end of the tunnel
provided by the Moon and Sun
Tall signs above of forever hope
I survived another day and night
JP, it is always such a pleasure to find your words against my poetry. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your wisdom with this little one
Gwen x
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Wow Gwen, short, fast and soooo powerful...hits like a punch for anybody going through the same....hugs xxx
Thanks Marion... yes some pains never leave and will always find away to come right back to the surface. Many hugs xxxx
Wow GWENDOLINE!!....like Marion said.....this packs a powerful punch....and so succinct in its delivery!!.......wow again!!........hope you're ok love!....yLOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo
Hello love...so glad the pack a punch came through. I wanted it to be short but with a pang. Some pains just constantly come back and hit us again don’t they. So glad it came across in this write xx
"
The wound was washed with salt today
Caused the eyes to sting
Made the mind detest the light
And every living thing"
Made my heart scream
against every beam
My soul believed
in the bright lights gleam
Ying and yang
torn at the seam
My mind reminded me
from the "Perpetual Pain"
My life has been
a sky filled with scars
Battles lost more than won
when will it be done?
Light at the end of the tunnel
provided by the Moon and Sun
Tall signs above of forever hope
I survived another day and night
Nice interpretation added to my piece Rob. Many thanks for sharing your own fused poetic thoughts x
Humanities lot in life in one little packet.
Wonderful.
JP, it is always such a pleasure to find your words against my poetry. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your wisdom with this little one
Gwen x
Aw great rhyming brevity sums up the tearful moment swell. Its awesome you can express it , orhers can't. Kudos!
Plz pleez request u to read and comment my newest poem too
Thank you so very much for your kind comment. I will certainly read your work also.
All the best
Gwen x