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Phantom Thunder

Phantom Thunder

What was it about him that led me asunder,

made my venus-node ache...then bring on the Thunder!?

I noticed him as he entered the room,

his dreamy companion completely in swoon

Dark,broody demeanor-

His body a squeal of splendor

Compelling...this creature,

with unsanctioned feature -

Longing to be the girl on his arm,

He'd bathe me in his mesmerizing charm!

A sensual smile adorning his lips...

A mouth so generous,one hardly could miss.

Abruptly he gazed at me, causing alarm -

Nervously, I started clutching my palm

So flushed,I rushed out into the night,

but slow molten tremors captured my flight.

Heat of his breathing danced in my neck -

Urgent lips that trailed down my back...

Firm, learned hands had freed out my breasts,

enticing and teasing those volatile crests!

Next , trailed his fingers down the front of my dress -

nestling strategically where my womanhood rests

My impending desire exploding !

Desirey body coaxing him into exploring.

With a slight shift of my thigh,

Open invitation he would not deny -

My resolve went limp,our fever now in sync

His hard male passion,thumping me towards the brink...

As I took in all of him, any way he desired...

He satiated the need in me till my flesh was afire!

Our bodies combusted as release came in rupture;

Moaning and groaning without reason or structure

Heart rates amending and skin cooling down...

Beratingly,reprimanding my conscience did frown -

But blessedly,this stranger-who did my cave plunder,

evaporated 'fore corruptive guilt in could wonder.

Such electrifying closeness he brought,

That in his absence bewildered I sought -

A nameless phantom that had led me asunder...

Then achingly...decadently, ... brought about my breaking Thunder!

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Tina Moore

very good write vianca  i enjoyed reading  intense     tina x

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B C

Wow... That was awesome. Thank you!

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Jimmy Arnold

Vianca,

A powerful poem of seduction and passion and an alluring usage, of words and feelings laiden within...Job very well done and highly enjoyed, by your readers...

Kind regards,

Jim   

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Vianca Adams

 Hi Jim,Thank You for your kind comments-and thanx for being specific on your commenting.I know you understand how much insightful commentary means.

Cheers!

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Jimmy Arnold

You are much welcome Vianca, you not only write your poetry, it appears you live in it, just as much, bringing yourself to be as one with your poetic art, allowing it to breath, live and share your heart, thus enticing it, to beat as one complete (living) entity...You truly are your poetry and it to be of you... Wonderful job..

Sincerely,

Jim

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