Poem -
PHOENIX RISING FROM THE FLAMES..
I won't accept where I am
I've so much more to give
Getting harder everyday
Just finding the will to live
Physically, I give my all
In every waking hour
Mentally, I feel suffocated
Unable to use full power
Underneath the sadness
Desire is burning through
Crossing an endless wilderness
Striving for pastures new
I see a glimpse of light
Flickering in and out
Pushing so hard to reach it
I want to scream and shout!
Devoid of all confidence
Weary of feeling ashamed
I'm down now but I'll rise again
Like a phoenix from the flames....
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Comments
I loved this write Jason, you do this type of genre so well. Filled with real emotion, and the flow and rhythm was spot on. Great final stanza and the last line clinched it. A complete piece, really enjoyed. A flaming 5*s (sorry couldn't help myself lol!) and nom from me :)x
Thank you kindly Mrs Gardiner, I truly appreciate your beautiful comment and nomination X:)
Great energy with this write Jason vote from me also matey!
Thanks Carey much appreciated :)
great write Jason congrats x
Great write marrow, i thought it was someone else writing . No joke's lol. Very deep.5* from me.
Haha cheers dude, I've been with the missus 20 years FFS, you know what marriage is like, sometimes you laugh but USUALLY I'm sobbing like a baby :D
So true mate i could only manage 14 years so i take me hat off to you. Well done i know exactly you mean, but by god you miss them when there gone.