Poem - 26 September 2018, 02:19

Pink Summer

Pink is my favourite colour
It goes with everythink
Pink is my favourite colour
It makes me think

Of summer

Of summer in the warm
No snow, rain or storm
Making everyone happy and felling so relaxed
No one's got time to be snappy

Everyone's just maxed

Everyone's just maxed out with happiness
Everyone's feeling generous
Don't want these days to end
Good feelings you send

My friend

My friend your there to take the pain away
I wish that you could stay
Would be nice to feel the sun on me
Each and every day.

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John Coggins26 September 2018, 13:02

Nice one Shorty Green! ☺

Tony Taylor29 September 2018, 10:48

Hello SHORTY GREEN!!...... this was such a fun read...... you definitely have a gift for using words well...... this is filled with VERY clever phrasing ~

~ "Pink is my favourite colour
it goes with everything..."

Very clever formatting combined with unique phrasing takes the reader into an arena that is uniquely your own.........I also liked the 'old school' spelling of some of your word choices!!....... Overall a well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered write!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done dear poet sister!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴?????✴?

Shorty Green29 September 2018, 11:37

Wow thanks so much for your kind comment and for reading my poem. ? xx