Poem -
Pink Summer
Pink is my favourite colour
It goes with everythink
Pink is my favourite colourΒ
It makes me thinkΒ
Of summer
Of summer in the warm
No snow, rain or storm
Making everyone happy and felling so relaxed
No one's got time to be snappy
Everyone's just maxed
Everyone's just maxed out with happinessΒ
Everyone's feeling generousΒ
Don't want these days to end
Good feelings you send
My friend
My friend your there to take the pain away
I wish that you could stay
Would be nice to feel the sun on me
Each and every day.Β
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Nice one Shorty Green! βΊ
Hello SHORTY GREEN!!...... this was such a fun read...... you definitely have a gift for using words well...... this is filled with VERY clever phrasing ~
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β ~ "Pink is my favourite colour
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β it goes with everything..."
Very clever formatting combined with unique phrasing takes the reader into an arena that is uniquely your own.........I also liked the 'old school' spelling of some of your word choices!!....... Overall a well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered write!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done dear poet sister!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?β΄?????β΄?
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Wow thanks so much for your kind comment and for reading my poem. ? xx
beautiful pen
Thanks so much xx
your eyes are poetry im lost in them
Aww thank you x
Nice piece of workΒ
Thanks hun x