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Pinnacle

Problems of the Popular

Pinnacle

Grain of salt,
Shadow of doubt.
Not my fault,
Don’t dance about.

Not my issue,
Your churning mind.
Yearning answers,
That’s just fine.

Your number one,
And I`m 72.
But tell me,
Is it lonely?
Is it true?

That standing on the pinnacle,
Is depressing, upsetting.
Because everyone`s
Sitting, just staring?

Well, your rock is limestone.
And waterfalls cut it deep.
Don’t lose your footing.
Dodge your problems.

With a grin that’s meek
The Fish of the Sea.

 

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Being Me

Standing on the pinnacle of a limestone rock...hmmm. Sounds to me like the person standing is going to take a tumble. I have no idea who the person is. Metaphorically I take it.  An interesting write Max. 

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The fish of the sea

Agreed Tina let's just say the person is Angus, top of his classes, was dux of my school. Found his way to my uni too. He reputation followed him... Thanks so much for your comment. It means so much. Peace and smiles to you, hope you are well. Your friend Max 

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al Bikaadi

It's lonely at the top... is there a technical name for the phobia of that? Cause I think I have it. My lack of stagefright is what makes me petrified about being in the limelight 😜

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The fish of the sea

XD, wow, what insight al Bikaadi, I wish I could do so... I`m only confident when I can back myself up lol! Kindest regards to you my friend. Hope you are well. Peace and smiles to you. Your friend Max

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