Poisonous rose
My hand in yours, meltingly warmÂ
Blood runs down my arm
from the thorns on your handÂ
Your velvet lips, so irresistibleÂ
I lean in for a kiss
for a moment of pure blissÂ
Our glossy lips separate, a trail of red followsÂ
Blood coats my lips like icing on a cakeÂ
I’ll endure anything for your sakeÂ
Separating into two, I look up at youÂ
Your face is my favorite viewÂ
Ever so gentle, you stroke my cheekÂ
and I try my best not to shriekÂ
It’s not your fault I leak
I’m just weakÂ
I love every single mark you leave on my skinÂ
They’re signs of affection, so it’s okay that they stingÂ
As long as you look at me, I winÂ
You call me your queen, you my KingÂ
Your breaths fill my lungs with savory smokeÂ
I can’t breathe, it’s so sweet I might choke
Even when you melt my body like butterÂ
I can feel my heart flutterÂ
I live blissfully under my King’s reignÂ
With you, I’d gladly wear a chainÂ
Hold my hand always, never mind the painÂ
It’s easy to wash away a stainÂ
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Comments
This reads like a beautifully romantic love poem and it is but with a nasty dark twist. I truly hope you start to see him for what he really is and get yourself far away from him. This has been written from the heart so 5 well earned stars. Welcome to Cosmo x
Thank you so much for your feedback, it warms my heart <3 I’m glad you enjoyed it :)
Bloody brilliant in execution. The message shines through... a poisonous rose. And I agree heaps with Tina, Romantic and dark, something that is a very original and challenging topic for many poets in my experience. My favourite technique would definitely be how you have managed to intertwine a passion of love like an addiction, sugar and cigarettes. Blown away by the work that's gone into this one. An awesome way to join the Cosmos. Might I add, very warm welcome to you!
Thank you so much!! It warms my heart that you appreciate my use of symbolism and your feedback means a lot to me <3Â