Poem -
Powerless
Dreams in our hearts, fading into dust.
tears on our cheeks, feeling the sadness,
Hopes filled with doubt, leaning towards rust.
Days turn to night, in all of the madness,
moments in life, may help to define us.
Folly friends leaving holes and emptiness,
circumstance predicting, who we are to trust
Filling our lives in the pursuit of gladness
Take every opportunity to help you make a crust,
creating your own future filled with success.
Opening your heart, this is a must,
allowing us to live and not feel so powerless.
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Comments
Hello LORNA CAIZLEY!!.....a lovely look at the truth going on around you....love the metaphor of "..you make a crust, creating your own future filled with success".......very well conceived & delivered.........strong sense of rhythm and timing here as well.......ALL STARS.......well done.......and ....,WELCOME to COSMO!!.......looking forward to more from you........LOVE and ROCKETS!.......T xoΒ Β ?
thank you so much, glad you liked it.
Welcome to this wondrous place called Cosmo. beautiful first submission!
thank you so much :)
Just progressing back to where it all begin and well worth the journey.
Hopes, hearts and dreams wrapped up in a quilted bundle, a quilted bundle poetically woven.
Great observations mirrored with feelings, what more could a reader want or need.
Full honours and worth it and hope all is well with yourself and thank you for sharing. x.
Blimey! That feels like a long time ago!!. I think I learned a bit since then..( well I hope I have) hahahahaha...
yes I'm well and I hope you are too
Thanks Shaun :)
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