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Predictable

A whisper heard but not understood,
MY VOICE.

A touch felt but not 
known,
MY HAND.

A sight seen but not 
familiar,
MY SOUL.

A willing set of ears to listen but not capable,
MY FLAW.

A comforting smell but not 
lasting,
MY SCENT.

A beautiful mind but not home to a healthy brain,
MY TRUTH.
 
 

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Tony Taylor

Hey RG!!.....I really like the honest, revealing, approach to this piece.....It's like an autobiographical attempt at seeing oneself from a removed point of view....like a serious stab at ultimate self-awareness!!.......ALL STARS!!......VERY compelling my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo  :  )

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RG

Spot on Tony, the first 17 years of my life were about everyone else. The last 14 years have been lived confused about who I was. Now, well now I am who I want to be and moving quickly towards who I want to become......So I feel it's okay to be selfish for once! I know my flaws and have accepted them, it's a blessing to have the ability to accept yourself and the confidence to share yourself. Thank you for the read and stellar comment as always:) . ~Rob 

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