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Pretty view

Looking down at you 
wow what a view ..
my god this is surreal ..
your tender touch leaves me weak , oh lord how I feel ..
how you do that ? what a come through ,
how your  love  pours, overflows
And my loves so pure solid like gold 
my heart you did so steal ..
tender ,sweet lovingly soft   kisses  , down you go .. my spine ! 
damm all very one controlled  and combined  .. 
my inner soul screams with such delight , as u work up to the inner line of my open vulnerable neck .
quite , as I’m softly told ..
I bite down on my bottom lip ..
now it’s pure frustration ..
As I grab a firm grip at the tip 
u pull down at my zip with your teeth 
its all just left to my imagination where  I’m about to proceed ...... wow what a damm pretty good view right now
 

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Tony Taylor

Hey JEN!!...... the whole piece oozing sensuality........ and the reader, along for the ride, has quite the "Pretty View" themselves!!......ALL STARS!!..... compelling stuff......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ??✴❤✴?

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Jen

Hey u ... yeah thanks boo boo xxxx

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Dean Kuch

Okay...
Now I'm gonna give a "Wow!" right back at ya, Jen.
Are ya ready?
Are ya sure?
Here it comes...
WOW!!!
This is a very sensual, extremely sensuous bit you've writing you've done here.
I enjoyed dipping in a bit  with you along your imaginations sexual rendezvous.
It was good for me.
How was it for you?
Now if you'll excuse me, I gotta go take a cold shower...heh-heh-heh...
~Dean ♥♫♪♫♥♀♂

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Jen

Hahahaha u gotta get the head goin and the thrill xxxx glad u enjoyed it mr .. so adorable u r xxxxxxx

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