Poem -
Pushing Away
once togetherÂ
torn apart
but you're always
in my heartÂ
when i left
my beat did toÂ
your my rhythmÂ
my good news
strong togetherÂ
fell apart
striking hardÂ
against your heartÂ
broke you down
again and againÂ
getting back upÂ
you let me win
i was stupid
plain and dumb
please forgive meÂ
you're my oneÂ
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Rusty!  This is a very strong poem…emotional with the pain of loss and regret.  Love the last stanza:
" was stupid
plain and dumb
please forgive meÂ
you're my one "
val
thanks and yeah i was trying to portray how i realized i screwed up but still wanted her there through all the pain