Raven

Comes a raven dark and leery,
Harbinger death so dreary.
Perched on rustic headstone,
Β Sojourn potential throne.
Sleek, pitch feathers sublime,
Telltale me, I'm out of time.
Echoes through still solemn trees,
Prayers unanswered on my knees.
Midnight chimes witching hour,
From foul shadows, I cower.
I beg the raven for more time,
Beady eyes judge for my crime.
Creeps death with foggy wake,
I pray my soul the Lord will take.
Aiming ghastly finger of bone,
Reckon my name in stone.
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Hey DARKLY!!
I LOVE the way you have delivered such an array of dark word choices all in one poem.... and woven them in so subtly..... creating the perfect tone for this subject matter!! ~
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I'd recognize your distinctive style ANYWHERE!!...... work it!! Own it!! Work it!! Own it!! (smiles)......ALL STARS!!......smokin' grooves girlfriend!!.....T xo ?β€?
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thank you Tony
Hi Poetess darkly
Brilliant words as usual
Thank you FFV
wonderful poem
thank you greg
Time and time again you deliver quality work.
Thank you John
Blessed to read the work of a talented writer.Β
Thank you kindly AnthonyΒ
Red,Β
Great writing, my friend! Dark, and foreboding, and intense. Wonderfully EAP-ish. Some really great lines throughout.Β
Loved it!Β
Matthew.Β
Thank you kindly MatthewΒ
You're welcome, Red...you're very mundane...but you're still welcome. lol. C'mon, get excited! Look at all those reads, and likes and comments. I'd be excited, I get one. lol. Of course, my writing stinks, but that's not the point, we're here to make friends, and encourage each other, right?Β
Anyway, great job, bucko.Β
M.Β
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