Poem -
Rebirth
Wondering lightÂ
How you dance within my minds eyeÂ
Crystal seasÂ
Reflect your tranquil raysÂ
Jet setting my heartÂ
Towards the furthest starÂ
Where fear turns to braveÂ
For within the netherworldsÂ
My lucid thinkingÂ
Plucks out any self doubtÂ
BemusedÂ
I choose to rest within your setting sunÂ
To lay in dreamsÂ
Forged and spunÂ
From Remnants as old as time begun Â
I have watched you sew the seeds of loveÂ
Branch out your naked boughs
Replenished all that turned to dustÂ
Where slumbered hearts arouseÂ
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Comments
wonderful poemÂ
Thanks Greg ❤️
Wow. Gwen. This was out of this world. I. Always blown away by the concepts and wordplay that you come up with, it's so very exciting as a reader. Really, just marvelous poetry here. Sorry I haven't been around was out in the country for a few days. Hope to catch up soon! Your Fish Fan, Max~
Awe thank you Max :) so pleased you liked this one. I hope your trip was fun :) Wow I can’t wait to leave my country, I am desperate to see my family in France. We are not allowed to travel abroad yet :(Â
Thank you for your kind comments and support as always you are a delight on Cosmo and I can’t wait for your next poemÂ
Your friend Gwen :)
I agree with fish of the sea the concepts in this are brilliant. Great write.Â
Thanks so much Liliana :)Â
Great write; thanks for sharingÂ
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Thank you so much Leah :)
'I choose to rest within your setting sun'Â
I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS LINE!!
great write <3 xx
Thanks so much Mira for reading and leaving your lovely words with my poem. I like that line too :)Â
Good one Gwendoline.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
Thanks ever so much Terry xo :)
Gwen that's what the soul is all about and you have captured and projected it more than well.
A real tour de force of a poem, a beautiful poem that stands out and brightly shines for all to see and take poetry solace from.
Loved your closing line , the delightful icing on the poetry cake.
You write so clearly , concisely and from your heart and are a gifted joy to read time after glorious time.
Always unique and always engaging
Thank you Gwen for writing something more than simply special.❤️
Wow Shaun I can’t thank you enough for this wonderful message on this poem. You are so supportive. I always enjoy reading your thoughts on my work. Always attentive to people’s poems and alway so very kind. Thank you so very very much for being my friend 💛 :)
GWEN ~ this is truly a fine "Tour-de-force" piece which Shaun eluded perfectly......your skill as a writer is shining here. It hits home powerfully for me dear poet sister!! Your ability to stir the soul is a gift from the Gods!!.....PINNED for perfection!!......Bravo!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thanks Tony for stopping by and leaving your wonderful words. I enjoyed writing this. It was one of those poems that just spills out of you. Many many thanks for ALWAYS being so wonderfully supportive of me. I am forever grateful đź’— your good friendÂ
Gwen :) x