Poem -
Reckless Abandonment
Reckless abandonment
I taught you well
To blanch my wanting heart
Into the fires of hell
Where ashes speak of only failed dreams
That wrench apart what little light streams
Diminished soul-
It aches to be renewed
Brewed in cherished misspent youth
Love eludes a hidden truth
Whistful memories force to remmenise
The secrets of that perfect kiss
Now sits upon the sidelines feeling spent
The heart left fuelled -
With bitterness and resent
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Comments
wonderful poem
i feel it
Thank you so much Greg so grateful for your feedback and like ✨🌻
You’re so welcome
So Packed with emotions and angst Gwendoline...it brims with feeling.
Really good write...hugs 💕
Thanks so very Marion, always love your feedback, big hugs to you too 💗
Gwendoline raw emotions on display and for all the right reasons and flawlessly well written and presented.
And we've all been there, trying to move and wonder how did things come to this. That's bittersweet life and love for you.
And yeah things do improve steadily but one never truly forgets or forgives.
Full honours bestowed for your poem that hits it mark so poetically well and doesn't let go.
And thanks for writing and sharing.✨
Hello Shaun, you have pampered me with your attentive feedback today, I cannot thank you enough. It is so encouraging. What you said is all so true. And it can feel never ending at the time. Thank you for your thoughtful words 🌻
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Wow Gwen what power you have on those lines I read. Just beautifully flowed and yet so amazing deep.in emotions. Ssoo pinned! Just loved this dramatic piece. Px
Hello Pratibha 😊 thanks again for looking at my work. I am thrilled you liked it. Thank you so very much for the pin too. I am enjoying reading people’s work and will soon stop by and read yours also. Thank you for your kind words and encroachment 🌻💛
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I think the amount of support that you're receiving your work, simply speaks for itself, fantastic, although I had to point out;
Your wordplay and the soft, yet solid (I know that's an oxymoron) structure, is just so very powerful. Contest worthy? I think so!!
Hello Max XD
Thank you for reading this one. When I read your words “but I have to point out” I gulped and thought I had made a boo boo 🙊 I was so relieved when I read on. Wow you put a big smile on my face. Gosh I actually feel pampered today. Everyone has been so blinking nice. It’ has been so lovely. Thank you for giving me your time and words of encouragement. I am planning to read more of yours very soon. I have enjoyed your work
happy writing 😊🌻
Ahh but you deserve it Gwen! Glad I gave you a smile! No rush on my work though, I only write one a week :)... My way of controlling myself during my uni studies. Peace to you though! Keep writing, because your talented!!
Ooooh...this ones juicly good! Sad, granted, but goooooood.
A heart like that is capable of great poetry! ⚘x
Hello Being Me 😊
many thanks, my bitterness gets the better of me at times. Am glad you liked this piece 🌻💛
Well we cant be sweet all the time. And although we are supposed to be angels, sometimes more fun can be had on a broomstick 😉 x
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