Poem -

Red Rock

a swimming hole

Red Rock

red rock

i was there with you,Β seems
a dream or wake, years long ago.
Β 
the sage and oak give way to a
meadow that weaves down to a stream
and finds a swimming hole deepΒ with
shadows from a canyon wall, the sunlight
sparkling on the meadow's side.
Β 
there, i remember you and i, floating,
eyes up backs arched, warmed by the sun
and cool in the clear water glistening, we
watched the leaves quake green, gold, and
silver, as we eddied silent in the wind.
Β 
today, as I looked to the hills above,
i recalled the dream the day you and I,
in the meadow on the water in the wind.Β 
there then, i was at peace complete,Β 
and love itself was life to me.
Β 
so did you make me feelΒ those years ago,
and still now, in dreams or wake again.
Β 

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Mark Olcott

thank you v much for the read, your time, the time you took to read it is valuable and Im grateful for it

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Syd

I often struggle with freestyle writing. You have written this very well Mark.
Great write.

- Syd

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Mark Olcott

Syd, thank you, very grateful for your read and comment.

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Marion

Wow Mark...I almost felt I was floating too watching those leaves quake green gold and silver...awesome work my friend x

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Mark Olcott

thank you Marion,

there is room in the cool clear water waiting for you there

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Neville

What an experience that was my friend .. thanks for the glide .. NevilleΒ 

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Being Me

This is an accomplished piece of writing! It's true poetry. Emotion and words that paint a picture. A private snapshot in time and only a poem can do it justice. Beautiful, beautifulΒ  writing, Mark x

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Mark Olcott

Thank you very much for your time and your comment. mark.

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