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RED WINE GENIE

RED WINE GENIE

R ound and full-bodied you are

E ntity inside the jar

D are I set you free again, Dark and mysterious within

W icked, you are the red wine Djinn

I lluminated by the sun

N ever turn your back and run

E nchanting and hypnotic scent, then i espy thee

G enie swirling from the vortex, forming before me

E nters my domain

N oxious by name

I ngest the wicked one, then relish

E soteric being grant me but one wish ...Release my anguish...

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Tina Moore

great write carey ,i really digested this one .sexy and  impressive !!   love it        tina x

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BLOSSOM

Liked this one Carey, sensual side to wine lol!!  Hard to do an acrostic without sounding forced; great job :)

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Carey Milton

Cheers Rachel.  This one was fun and challenging to write..just how I like em :)

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Carey Milton

Cheers Marc and thanks for the friend request :)

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Valerie Beasley...

Cary…excellent acrostic!  This is a masterful write, get flow and well connected from line to line.  

Wonderful!!!

val

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Carey Milton

Really appreciated this feedback ! Big smile here :) Thank you

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Carey Milton

Thanx Tina! Appreciate these comments so much :)

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Carey Milton

Thanks Susan reading more and more of your pieces also very inspiring!

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